What Is Your Greatest Accomplishment?(英语口语万能模板) 你最大的成就是什么?
STAR法则:
(S) Situation - Describe the situation and the context in which the event took place.
(T) Task - Talk about the tasks you had to complete (i.e. your challenge or responsibility).
(A) Action - Explain the actions you took to address the above-mentioned challenges or responsibilities.
(R) Results - Explain the kind of results you achieved. When describing the outcome, if possible, mention numbers and quantifiable facts
star法则 :
(S)情况-描述事件发生的情况和背景。
(T)任务-谈论你必须完成的任务(即你的挑战或责任)。
(A)行动-解释您为应对上述挑战或责任所采取的行动。
(R)结果-解释你所取得的结果。在描述结果时,如果可能的话,要提到数字和可量化的事实
Situation - “Well, as a recent graduate of ... University, I think my greatest achievement was what I managed to accomplish during my time there. My scholarship only covered half of the tuition, and my family was unable to support me financially.
情况——“嗯,作为一个刚毕业的……我认为我最大的成就是我在那里所取得的成就。我的奖学金只支付了一半的学费,而我的家人也无法在经济上养活我
Task - “So, I learned early on that I had to manage my time down to the hour in order to be efficient and on top of everything.”
任务——“所以,我很早就学会了,我必须把时间管理到一个小时,以便保持高效和最高的一切。”
Action - “I worked in every summer and winter vacation. Through hard work and dedication, I managed to balance studying, working part-time, and even volunteering to gain some experience. It was tiring at times, but I scheduled pretty much everything I had to do in my personal calendar. This way, I never missed a deadline, assignment or any other responsibility.”
行动——“我每年的暑假和寒假都在工作。通过努力工作和奉献,我成功地平衡了学习,兼职工作,甚至志愿获得一些经验。有时会很累,但我把所有要做的事情都安排在我的个人日程上。这样一来,我就从来没有错过过最后期限、任务或任何其他责任。”
Results - “In the end, I graduated with a GPA of 3.8 +成就, and also interned as the university social media assistant during my last 2 semesters. There, I also learned a lot about marketing, how to communicate with our followers, and managed to organize the biggest university event where up to 500 students showed up.”
结果:“最后,我毕业时的平均绩点为3.8+成就,并在最后两个学期担任了大学社交媒体助理。在那里,我也学到了很多关于市场营销的知识,如何与我们的追随者交流,并设法组织了一场最大的大学活动,有多达500名学生到场。”
EXAMPLE 1:
Situation: My greatest achievement was in a previous role where I was working as part of a team on the launch of a new company product.
Task: We wanted to make the product launch as successful as possible.
Action: So we started out by brainstorming different ideas about how we could launch the product before presenting them to our manager for approval. After he gave us the go ahead to launch the product, we worked tirelessly to push it out to as many people as possible.
Result: My task was to create the social media posts during the product launch, and these proved to be a huge success. Once the product launch was finished my manager informed us that we, as a team, had managed to surpass all previous product launches in terms of sales!
例子1:
情况:我最大的成就是在之前的一个职位上,我作为一个团队的一员,在发布一个新的公司产品。
任务:我们希望让产品的发布取得尽可能的成功。
行动:所以我们先进行不同的头脑风暴,在提交给我们的经理批准之前,关于如何推出产品的想法。在他允许我们推出这个产品后,我们不知疲倦地把它推广给尽可能多的人。
结果:我的任务是在产品发布期间创建社交媒体上的帖子,这些帖子获得了巨大的成功。在产品发布完成后,我的经理告诉我们,作为一个团队,我们已经设法在销售方面超过了之前所有的产品发布
EXAMPLE 2:
Situation and Task: My greatest achievement was working in my last role where I managed to help the company win an important sales contract.
Action: I was part of a three-person team and our job was to put together the company proposal, and then deliver it to our manager who would submit it for tender. We worked really hard for two weeks to get the information and the proposal together, and we made sure it was as cost effective and efficient as possible.
Result: A week after my manager submitted our proposal, we received the news that we had won the sales contract! It was great team effort, and something I am still very proud of today.
示例2:
情况和任务:我最大的成就是在我的最后一个职位上工作,我设法帮助公司赢得了一份重要的销售合同。
行动:我是一个三人团队的一员,我们的工作是把公司的提案整理起来,然后交给我们的经理,由经理提交投标。我们花了两周的时间来收集信息和提案,并确保它尽可能地具有成本效益。
结果:在我的经理提交了我们的提案一周后,我们收到了我们赢得了销售合同的消息!这是一个伟大的团队努力,我今天仍然感到非常自豪