23年3月四级作文预测二 社交媒体是否应该限制未成年人-模板范文

题目

模板

(看不太清楚可以看看阿瑞老师以前的作文课哟)

第一段

①先列我们的背景是什么；其次列出选择，我的看法；第三句话，过渡句

②此次建议背现象解释型(即写法1)

第二段

①翻译中讲过一个句子，如果有三个以上的成分，前面都用逗号，最后一个要用"and"来连接。→也可以用到写作中来。

②"According to experts…"相当于我们以前写的"Based on big data基于大数据"

③⚠️使用谚语的时候一定要注意be动词的单复数形式

④take an active role in 积极参与到

⑤navigate the potential pitfalls

(pitfall陷阱) 避开潜在的陷阱

全文

(第一段写法1)As the advancement of technology, it is of great necessity for youngsters to grasp the core technique of social media. Therefore,I think we shouldn't have laws to limit the use of social media under the age of 18. The following reasons can account for my opinion.

(第一段写法2)Nowadays the public have different opinions upon soclal media. Some think that to limit the use of social media to those who are under 18 is beneficial, while others think to have a free access is a better choice. Personally, I prefer the latter.The following reasons can account for my preference.

First and foremost, there is no doubt that social mecia allows youngsters to connect with friends and family, access information and educational resources, and even participate in social and political causes. According to experts, most of young people have admitted that they've learned 60% useful knowledge by using social media. Furthermore,it is obvious that,social media companies cannot effectively verify the age of every user, and young people may simply lie about their age to gain access to social media. Where there are people, there are lies. Last but not least, no one can deny that parents should take an active role in monitoring their children's social media use.This would help young people navigate the potential pitfalls of social media while still enjoying its benefits.

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the influence of social media on young people. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.

随着科技的进步，年轻人掌握社交媒体的核心技术是非常必要的。因此，我认为我们不应该制定法律来限制18岁以下的人使用社交媒体。以下原因可以解释我的观点。(法一)

现在公众对社交媒体有不同的看法。一些人认为限制18岁以下的人使用社交媒体是有益的，而另一些人认为免费使用社交媒体是更好的选择。就我个人而言，我更喜欢后者。以下原因可以解释我的偏好。(法二)

首先，毫无疑问，社交媒介让年轻人与朋友和家人联系，获取信息和教育资源，甚至参与社会和政治事业。据专家称，大多数年轻人承认他们通过使用社交媒体学到60%的有用知识。此外，很明显，社交媒体公司无法有效地验证每个用户的年龄，年轻人可能会为了访问社交媒体而谎报年龄。有人的地方就有谎言。最后但并非最不重要的是，没有人能否认父母应该在监督孩子使用社交媒体方面发挥积极作用。这将帮助年轻人在享受社交媒体带来的好处的同时，避开社交媒体的潜在陷阱。

总之，整个社会都应该密切关注社交媒体对年轻人的影响。只有这样，我们才能有一个光明和充满希望的未来。