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Education of youngpeople is highly prioritized in many countries.

However ,educatingadults who cannot write or read is even more important and governmentsshould spend more money on this.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

单边 

不同意

必须承认， 教育成人 有好处

然而 ，更应该投资教育年轻人

同意

必须承认  教年轻人有好处

然而，更应该教成人  

Despite it being consideredby some，that educating illiterate adults is more worthy than educating young people, I tend to oppose thisopinion and my own personal evaluation will be presented.

Indeed, there areseveral benefits in terms of training adults who have not been to schools.

观点

One is that it is a social well farethat will boost the overall literacy level in the whole society.

Why  解释原因

As an increasingnumber of jobs are replacing by robots, educated labor force will better cater for the job marketand this technological era.

Not only can they find jobseasily, but also they can provide better education to their kids once they areliterate.

举例

It is reported that kids from poor home schooling environment are more likely to drop out of schools and commit crimes compared to those whose parents can either teach by themselves or offer better education access to their kids.

As a result, the educationlevel of citizens is not a matter of individual, but has ripple effect in a largerscale.

Nevertheless, it is theyoung generation that are the major force of the future and therefore should beinvested on education.

In contrast with adults, theyare innovative and vibrant who aspire to change the world.

In this digital age wheretechnology is largely popularized, young people have the power and expertise to generate breakthroughs in every aspect of our life.

举例

Take the founder of Facebook to illustrate.

Mark used to receive top quality education in Harvard ,and this equipped him to be an exceptional coding professional in creating a global platform ,connecting people online.

Followed this vivid instance, numerous productive young entrepreneurs have appeared, who are revolutionizing the future of the world.

反证

Had these young talents not educated, they would not have created cutting edge technology, which have boosted the well beings of humans.

In closing, while governments can subsidize adults oneducation, it is vital to allocate more financial resources on youngpeople.

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