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雅思口语官网6分

2020-07-21 11:24 作者:屠雅思带7分  | 我要投稿

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考生6分原因

1流利,秒回

2 简单句+复杂句,没有明显频繁的语法错误

3 发音清晰

为何只有6分

没有内容,通常1-2句话就回答了par3的问题

没有内容自然谈不上回答的层次,也谈不上展开/论证充分

 

启示:

达到6分的标准后,从层次上展开,以句型充实层次,并带具体的例子论证

下面是我建议的回答

 

 What are the advantages of reading about a country before you visit it ?

考生回答,culture ,local culture,rules

我的建议:

P1

总,同义替换问题,给一个总的回答

 There are some benefits to get to know one country before visiting it .

P2 就benefits 分层展开来谈,分2 层,中间用衔接词

1One is that in terms of the effectiveness of travelling , having some knowledge of the culture of the destination will offer you better access to understand their local culture ,thus ,enriching your whole travelling experience

2 For example , I am really a world wide traveler ,and travelling for me does not only mean  site seeing ,but also more at the cultural exploration part. So ,everywhere I go ,I will dig out the history as much as I can before I land in that place . Before I went to UK , I did review different prestigious novels about UK ,such as jane, the comedies of 莎士比亚 and when I travelled there ,I could combine what I learnt from books with what I saw practically.

 3,Besides ,traveling in a new place accompanies danger and risk, that is why it is suggested that you had better do some research before arriving.

4 Before I went to morocco ,I learnt from the internet that solo female traveler need to pay special attention and later it turned out to be true . Without researching first ,I would be likely to get into trouble

 P3 总,回应问题 So it is important to get to ……

 

 Do you think most people do this before they visit the place?

Well ,I don’t think most people do that ,it is case by case ,different people have different preference towards whether or not prefer for their trips .

For those who pay attention to cultural exploration as I mentioned ,they will do ,like I will do .

However ,for those who travel with groups instead of travelling alone ,it is not necessary for them to do as/since  the agency has already arranged everything in order for them

 

Are there any disadvantages of doing that ?

实事求是的回答

Well ,for me ,I dont not see any drawbacks of doing so ,except that you need to spend some time studying first .

And the fact is that if you don’t do so ,you will be likely to take some risks ,such as the culture shock or some real danger if you are in a place where stealing is popular .

 

Some people choose to go with a guide to unfamiliar place,  ,do you think it will improve the quality of the experience?

Well ,it still depends on the style of your traveling

If you are used to go with others or guides ,yes ,having someone lead you will be more comfortable for you .from this point of view ,yes ,it will improve your experience of travelling especially if you visit come historical sites. Having some guide explaining to you on the way will impress you in a better way .

However, for some adventurists like me ,I would prefer to explore by myself ,and the unexpected is what I look for in my trips as I always welcome unknown things .

 

 

So it is important to travel independently or to go with a guide? 


To most people ,do they prefer to …or ….


When you travel in familiar site ,do you think it is more important to visit sights or meet local people?

well ,I am traveler who prefers to do cultural travelling ,and connecting with local people matters more to me compared to seeing the nature views .

I did spend 3 years going through the whole American continent ,I did go through numerous wonderful sceneries .but what left deepest impression is still the story which happened between me and locals, among which the most unforgettable is the story when I was in peru ,living with an indigenous family ….

 

The government should protect local historical  ?

Yes

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就历史遗迹的功能而言  

 

就实际收入而言

 

 

 

 

 

 


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