雅思口语par3 实例

剑13 真题 par3

What is the impact on society if people have a poor life –work balance

依然是层次+句型

par3的问题回答需要分层展开，其实par1 也是如此，只是par1 的问题更偏日常生存场景，，

所以par3口语我是让我的学生是跟着大作文一起按分类话题准备的，因为需要话题性词伙。

第一句 总，同义替换题目，不要原文重现

undoubtedly ,it is true that if people could not balance well between their personal life and work ,it may have negative impact not only on themselves but also on the society .

  分层:-medical service  挑战

        -crime rate 上升

       -population structure   影响劳动力

As for the society ,if a large number of people behave poorly on this subject , there will be an increasing number of unhealthy people, which will pose heavy burden /be a challenge for local hospitals .

Meanwhile 衔接词 , they may also suffer from mental problems especially in metropolises ,resulting in the likelihood of increase of the crime rate .

这一段可以不要，Moreover,衔接词， in terms of the structure of population , the unbalance symbolizes the serious competition in this place, which means only young people could survive in the city instead of the old . As long as the young people come to the age when they want to settle down ,they would choose to leave this city ,accounting for the problem of the labor shortage  .