题目解析13—What is your biggest achievement?

注意事项： 

1. 事例要认真挑选，既能够反映出自己的水平，又能别出心裁。例如，专业第一名是很俗的例子，但是从第十涨到第一就是很好的例子。 

2. 不要担心成就不够大，在阅历丰富的面试官眼里，没什么算“大” ，关键是你取得成就的过程，过程中体现出的品质。 

3. 可以多表达一些自己的感悟，让面试官看到你的闪光点 

4. 体现的品质还是一贯的建议——和项目偏好、职业规划结合 

建议结构： 

具体成就+思考收获+与未来相关如何？ 

PART1  事例 

提示：真实；体现某种优秀品质；最好是近期的。 

1. Train for and finally completed a marathon or other sporting achievement 

2. Set up a new student society or turned a struggling one into something more successful 

3. Overcome a fear by completing something I were frightened of 

4. Go travelling alone despite nerves 

5. Give a presentation at an event and got over public speaking worries 

6. Raise a certain amount of money for charity 

7. Help others to succeed – for example, by teaching them a new skill 

PART2  收获 

提示：情感要真挚，尽可能地展现自己的优秀品质。 

This taught me to prioritize my time, to build great habits and to stay focused on my goals. I’m proud of this accomplishment and I feel that what I learn is going to give me a big advantage in my study and life now. 

PART3  升华 

提示：这部分因人而异，但是核心原则就是扬长避短，总结自己成就中的不足，未来用具体的措施克服，对于成就中好的一面，则进一步地发挥，实现自己的社会价值。 

Sample: Volunteer Achievement 

My biggest achievement is helping a rare disease organization raise money by using the 

methodology of management consulting. As a member of XXXXX Club, which provides non-paid consulting services to NGOs in China, I’m involved in a fundraising project of a rare disease organization. 

My major responsibilities included preparing a fundraising application document and establishing an evaluation model of fundraising efficiency. For one thing, through many expert calls and desk research, I summarized the benefits for patients to receive recovery treatment and indicated the importance of fundraising in the application document. 

For another thing, [可结合专业能力、知识应用于实际问题，如分析研究、优化管理流程等等] 

Finally, our team helped the organization raise over 100,000 yuan. I’m so excited that with my professional skills, I’m really doing something for the community