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一、方法技巧——五步写作法

（一）高分标准

1、故事要围绕主要人物展开。

2、详细刻画人物角色及其情感。

3、有效使用连接成分,结构紧凑。

4、运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动。

5、第一段和第二段的内客衔接自然,逻辑合理通顺。

6、续写内容与所给短文融洽度高,语言风格保持一致,思想积极上

（二）增加加节

1、环境描写

2、肖像描写

3、动作描写

4、语言描写

5、心理描写

（三）高分手段——营造冲突

1、人物和人物之间的冲突

2、人物和环境之间的冲突

（四）升格语言

1、非谓语动词

2、with复合结构

3、双形客词作状语

4、特殊句式

（五）写作步骤

1、虛拟语气

2、常用修辞

3、Step1浏览所给信息,确定大意主题一落点

4、Step2梳理已知段落,确定主要情节一重点

5、step3借助段落开头,确定续写内容一突破点

6、Step4刻画细节冲突,优美连表达一亮点

7、Step5做到首尾呼应,结构完整合理一基本点

（六）两个雷区

1、情节设计要符合生活实际和文章逻辑,避免太过离奇。

2、叙述力求精炼、生动、连贯、对话不要太多、书面化的长句不宜太多。

二、读后续写语料库

（一）读后续写语料库（动作描写）

head

1. He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。

2. They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头表示同意。

3. She shook her head in disbelief.她怀疑地摇摇头。

4. He scratched his head, not understanding a word.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。

5. She buried her head in the pillow.她用枕头捂住脑袋。

6. She rested her head on his shoulder.她将头靠在他的肩膀上。

7. His head drooped and tears fell into his lap.他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。

8. I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。

9. He put/held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.他双手抱头，十分生气。

10. It never entered my head that he might be lying.我从未想过他会撒谎。

11. I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。

12. He could feel his head spinning after only one drink.他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。

13. He turned and headed for the door.他转身朝门口走去。

14. She stood up and headed towards the exit. 她起身朝出口走去。

face

1. A bright smile appeared on/ spread across/ crossed his face.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。

2. Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。

3. His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。

4. His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点困惑。

5. Jack’s face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。

6. Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。

7. He had a slight frown on his face.他看上去愁眉不展的样子。

cheek

1. He rested his cheek on her shoulder.他将面颊靠在她的肩上。

2. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。

3. Her cheeks were wet with tears.她泪流满面。

4. Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。

5. A tear slid down her cheek.一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。

6. He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train.他亲了亲她的脸颊，然后上了火车。

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