【雅思总分9斯坦福学长】7节课突破雅思小作文7分 - IELTS Writing

一.动态图和静态图标类型及特征
- Dynamic Table: identify the main trends
diff&comm in trends

- Static Table: compare the different variables
diff&comm in quantities
注意:动态和静态的区别不在于时间维度,虽然通常来说时间维度可以用来做区分。

二.什么是好的雅思小作文

1.简节明了
2.可与原图对应
3.不能给到观点
三.动态图表写作-Line Chart
动态图的核心是趋势:
①开头+整体趋势:上升、下降、波动
②个别趋势:通过分组,分别描述

step1:Summary(找大趋势)
what is the general trend?
例题:整体趋势上升
step2:Grouping
what are the major commonalities and differences between trends?

Summary:
同义替换;框架;时态;general trend
The line graph demonstrates(shows) the main motivations(reason-纵坐标) people expressed for relocating to the countryside from the urban area of a capital city in 1990,2000 and 2010(time-横坐标)
The years witnessed a large number of people moving away(general trend).
Grouping 1:
分组原因;折线的起点,终点,转折点,交汇点,高点,低点
According to the graph, the major reason for relocation was the rising cost of living. In 1990, 65000 people left the city because of it, then the number peaked at 85000 in 2000, before going down a bit by 5000 in the decade between 2000 and 2010.
Grouping 2:
分组原因;组内的相同和不同
it was a different story for traffic and lifestyle: both had the same number of city leavers at 20,000 at the start of the period, much lower than that of the rising cost of living
Subsequently, both categories saw increases, with traffic first going up by a large number to 35,000 by the year 2000 and then even more steeply to 60,000 by 2010; Lifestyle leavers rose consistently over the whole period, going eventually to 40,000.
Conclusion:可以进行补充说明,不是观点表达


Summary:
framwork+general trend
①framwork:犯罪数量+时间
②没有general trend 怎么写:
就说展现了不同的趋势,move in totally different trend;
Grouping 1:
英国+新西兰(基本上都是上升)
Grouping 2:
澳大利亚+美国+加拿大(波动)
动态图中相关表达句式:
动态图中趋势的“相关”表达:

①一段数据的上升或下降的(两个点):
sub是主体的意思



②连续变化数据:


