七七 | 高考英语读后续写抢分特辑

三个切入点：结构、内容、语言

1️⃣衔接词

灵魂拷问︰这个动作什么时候发生?

现在，立刻，马上

• immediately
• in a flash
• at that moment
• without delay / hesitation

然后

• （and）then... / afterwards
• after that / later on
• before long, ...很快
• Finally, ... / Eventually, ...

“每天起床第一句”

• early in the morning
• the next morning / day

一...就...

• as soon as
• the moment +句子
• On / Upon doing sth, ....
• Hardly…, when…
• No sooner … than…
• The moment we arrived at the farm,
• On/Upon arriving at the farm, what came into sight were varieties of fresh vegetables and fruit trees.

突然

• A was doing xx, when B did xx ...
• l was enjoying the fantastic scenery around when something unpleasant caught my eye.
• l was about to leave when something unpleasant caught my eye.

2️⃣点睛、升华

①幡然醒悟，花式REALIZE，告别一“I"到底

• 经历作主语：This special experience in someone else's room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
• 主从作主语：What happened that day made me realize that forgiveness is akind of virtue.
• 强调句：lt was the special experience that made me realize forgiveness is a kindof virtue.
• 倒装句：
• Not until then did l realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
• Only then did l realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.

强调句+状从

Now I'm proud of what l look like and much happier because l have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are. 【人与自找】

REALIZE升级

• lt suddenly dawned on me that …
• Only then did it dawn on me that …

②From then on 落实行动

• From then on, l would try my best to help people like ... Only in this way couldmore and more people help each other in the future.
• From then on, Bernard（视角转换）made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way could more and more people help each other inthe future. 【2020年山东卷】
• From that day on, every time l meet someone who needs help, l always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.【八省联考】

③睹"物""忆"人，情感升华

• Seeing sth., l felt as if it had been doing and saying, "..."
• Seeing the prize again, I felt as if it had been smiling, encouraging me and saying, "It's never too late to learn".
• REMEMBER
• 状从
• I knew for sure that every time l lost patience in the future l would remember my grandfather's words.
• 主从
• What I will remember forever are inspiring words of wisdom outside theheadmaster's office, which made me understand it's up to me to change myenvironment.

REMEMBER升级

l keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also, the power of words.

温情类故事肿么办?

笑声回荡

• The room echoed with our happy laughter.
• All of them laughed with happiness, the laughter echoing in the room.

情景交融

• The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us up.
• Cold as the weather was, deep in her heart was full of warmth. She would letgo of her fear and ..., not only for .... but more importantly, for herself.

难忘“今宵”

• Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked about the unexpected joy that Christmas tree had brought us and about the special childhood memories atthat time.

3️⃣搭配、语法结构

意外惊喜人人爱

• （Much / Greatly）to my surprise, he got full marks in the exam.
• What surprised me was that she got full marks in the exam.

前因后果非谓语

• Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl, she felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
• Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her, throwing the book at the girl.

特殊倒装显意志

• Tired as we were, we had great fun and a sense of achievement.
• Exhausted as she was, she still kept yelling at the top of her lung.

责备感谢皆虚拟

• lf l hadn't quarreled with Tom, I wouldn't have to be here.
• But for my mom's absent mind we couldn't have so many unexpected amusingsurprises during the trip.