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Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contribution to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 价值观话题

通过《Susie酥酥雅思写作十大话题语料》列出文章大纲：（结合词汇来自1.价值观2.媒体3.工作）

整体倾向：不同意

观点一：体育和娱乐明星影响力超群，受众广泛，必然会在市场经济中得到巨大收益。

论证：歌手的专辑、好莱坞电影明星的电影可以面向全球粉丝；体育明星的观众也名声很大也可以通过广告代言收获巨大利益。

对比：相比之下，医生、护士和老师影响力有限，只能面对有限的病人和学生。(这句在写作时删掉了)

观点二：明星一般要活在聚光灯下，承受巨大的压力。

论证：他们、甚至他们的家人的言行都会被大众审视并被媒体夸大，所以他们的高收入也是对他们的一种合理补偿。

反方让步：但是有的人会认为医生、老师往往需要花很多年学习来获得相应的知识和专业技能，但他们的收入往往不如那些一夜成名的年轻明星。

反驳反方：其实一夜成名的明星十分稀少，大多数明星不仅需要多年的刻苦练习，还需要超出常人的天分，才能在娱乐和体育界激烈的竞争中获胜，最终成为所谓的明星。

When talking about the ridiculously high income高得离谱的收入 of certain celebrities, some would just become sour grapes酸葡萄，心生嫉妒的人, and they think those professionals专业人士 with greater social contributions should enjoy higher payments. However, I do not think this is realizable可实现的 in today’s market economy.

First and foremost, those personalities of sports and entertainment can always exert enormous influence in a gigantic巨大的 market, which in turn转而 give them great benefits. The albums of popular singers and the Hollywood movies of famous movie stars can be sold to their fans around the globe; world-renowned世界知名的 athletes can endorse international branded products名牌商品 to earn more than winning gold medals金牌. With huge fame earned by athletes and stars always comes great fortune to their hands. 倒装句，随着运动员和明星获得极大的声誉，巨大的财富也往往唾手可得。

Furthermore， fame can be a shortcut捷径 to love and money, but fame always comes at a price有代价. One of the penalties惩罚 of fame is the unavoidable life under the spotlight聚光灯 and the loss of privacy隐私. Once celebrities decide to sacrifice their happiness on the altar圣坛 of fame，their and even their families’ behavior and words would be scrutinized仔细查看 by the curious public and exaggerated by the nosy好管闲事的 media. So what celebrities earn actually justifies使合理 the stress they live under.

However, someone would argue that doctors, nurses and teachers usually dedicate dozens of years to learn their expertise专业技能 and attain related degrees, but their income is much less than those teenage influencers网红 who become famous online overnight. The counterargument反驳观点 I would like to offer here is that most celebrities not only need to spend years on rigorous艰苦的 training, but also require extraordinary talents to win in the fierce competition激烈的竞争 before they are too old to become famous.

All in all, I deem it is totally understandable for famous people to earn huge income in this market-driven society由市场驱动的社会. 330words