【雅思总分9斯坦福学长】7节课突破雅思写作7分 - Task 2 / Part
Structure

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五段(4-5段)
agree or disagree 题型:
观点需要进一步论述,不能list式列举,要展示自己倾向的观点
有效结构:

观点+原因/结果+:
1、伦理;2、论证;3、 欲扬先抑,驳倒对方的观点;4、结尾




让步拉回观点!
PromptA(高层面部分)

from one side or both?——one side+让步段

money(个人)——economy(国家)

高层面到细节
1、文化影响力(high)
2、cultural and historical sites (mid类似于解释)
3、detail(佐证观点)

agree / disagree
1、挑同意还是不同意
2、选三个高层面的观点
discuss both views give your opinion


1、挑一个支持
2、三个宏观观点
3、point 3 让步
advantages outweigh the disadvantages

tips:

相关点不要拘泥于小细节,要提升到宏观层面
idea generation
细节升到宏观
想一些万金油观点






创建自己的观点库

opening

引人入胜+新的信息+流程有逻辑+立场鲜明

细节引出反方观点,转折



用小词精确表达

reasoning

先说分论点
as far as 分论点 is considered, 观点
细节解释分论点+为什么能得出观点
所有细节与本段分论点一致

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if we do not have foreign visitors pay more, we will not only lose a great opportunity in showing national culture to citizens, but one in promoting patriotism as well.
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模板:
First and foremost, point one, as mid.
To be more specific, fact 1; in addition, not only, but (fact 2)




Exemplification

character+process+result

had it not been for, xx would never have able to ...
common issue
要强调普适性!

concession and ending



ending

(个人想法:不写名人名言)


