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老白 | 读后续写万能句式
1️⃣故事线S
- W：
- WHAT，WHO，WHERE，WHEN，WHY
- THEME
实战演练：
夫妻野外徒步后争吵，妻子独自出行迷路森林，等待救援。
One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom，had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reachedthe lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom."'m going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow.Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place.she turnedaround, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountaintop. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried."Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farthershe walked, the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall，Jane was so tired that she had to stopfor the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to holdhim and tell him how much she loved him.
- Who：Jane，Tom
- What：Jane was lost
- Where：In a forest
- When：One weekend in July
- Why：A quarrel with Tom，her husband
- Summary
- Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end.
- Theme
- Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts.
But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________
lt was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________
2️⃣突破点T
借助段首，构造内容
一、But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
- Jane是如何熬过这个夜晚的?
- How did Jane feel then?
- How did Jane make it through the night?
- Did she fall asleep and what was she thinking of？
二、It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
- Jane还未获救，今天会发生什么?
- Was Jane rescued and who rescued her?
- How was she rescued and how did she feel then?
亮点—刻画细节
- 环境、语言、心理、动作描写
- 丰富句式：非谓语，从句，倒装，独立主格，虚拟语气，强调句，感叹句
- 修辞丰富：比喻，夸张，拟人
一、环境描写
万能句式：Immediately / Suddenly / ，an absolute / a complete + n. + ruled the + 地点n. + and a wave of + 情绪n. + washed /swept over sb.
Immediately，an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her.
二、动作 + 心理描写
万能句式：Ones heart pounding fiercely and ones palm sweating，an inner voice told sb. that...（独立主格）
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating，an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
adj. and adj. as sb. was，sb. did sth, doing sth.（非谓语）
Tired and terrified as she was,Jane struggled to her feet，trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.
三、语言描写
万能句式：Luckily / Fortunately，it didn't take long before sb. did......
Luckily，it didn't take long before she found a cave.
万能句式：Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of and felt as if sth. had been doing and saying，"....."
Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cavehad been comforting her and saying, "come in，you must be exhausted!"
四、丝滑连接二段首
万能句式：With ...., sb.did....,+非限制定从
With that，she went to sleep，in whose dream her husband kept her company.
新的一天来了
万能句式：Judging from the_，it was evident that sb. was still trapped in___（without any help）. sb. was at a loss what to do.
Judging from the quiet surrounding，it was evident that Jane wasstill trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue. Jane was at a loss what to do.
转机出现
万能句式：It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do ……
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area frst.
万能句式：To one's great ____，
To her great joy，it didnt take her long to spot such a place and sheheard the deafening noise coming closer.
救援来了
万能句式：Seeing / Hearing sth，sb. felt a great sense of +情绪+ welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
Looking up and seeing a helicopter，Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.
求救
万能句式：情绪 +and +情绪，sb. spared no effort to do... so as to ...
Eager and excited，she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention.
基本点一回扣升华主题
- 感叹句
- 强调句
- 夹叙夹议
- 喃喃自语
欢喜大结局
万能句式：luckily / Fortunately / Eventually ……
Fortunately，she was noticed and brought into the helicopter. Here，she saw her husband，a man staring at her，wearing an expression of relief.
回归主题
万能句式：It was at the moment that sb. did not do ..... any morebut did......
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.
万能句式：What a valuable lesson for sb to learn!
What a valuable lesson for the couple to learn！
