【广州申友雅思】雅思写作Task2，社会类剑桥雅思大作文全解析及范文

雅思大作文怎么样解题？怎么扣题想到观点？从哪些角度来写文章？怎么组织内容拓展观点？

广州申友雅思写作名师Sofia老师是这样解题分析和答题的

剑桥15 test4 task2

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题目分析：

在一些国家，孩子被告知只要努力就能得到任何想要的东西——优缺点讨论双向讨论

优点：努力了不一定会成功，但是不努力你一定不会成功的，努力争取自己想要得到的东西和追求自己的梦，战胜自己才算是真正的赢家，如果自己努力了还是得不到那也是值得的，努力的过程也是一种收获。

缺点：努力学习的陈词滥调并不适用于生活的许多领域，尤其是那些需要天赋和顿悟的领域，用1-2个例子。

范文：

In some countries，elders often teach the younger generations with an old saying that where there is a will，there is a way and tell them success comes from diligence. From my point of view, diligence can help people achieve their goal but whether people can succeed is also affected by many other factors.

First of all, such ideology is surely do our lives more good than harm because except mere chance, most opportunities stem from our own attitude and mindset. Opportunities are always around us, waiting for those with courage and enterprise to seize them. What’s more, many of our opportunities, are the result of hard work and perseverance. A perfect example is the Olympic athletes. Many Olympians are born with superior physiques, but without years of rigorous training, none of them would have realized their potential or have had the opportunity to participate in the Olympic Games.

However, the persuasive platitudes of hard work cannot be applied to every trade without considering people’s talent and epiphany. A case in point: people who are biologically endowed with lower IQ are least likely to be a famous mathematician like Leonhard Euler, no matter how hard they try to study and practice. Likewise, a child suffering from congenital heart disease is fated not to run as Liu Xiang does. In this view, the encouragement and inspiration from parents or teachers are essentially a kind of poison that will make children feel frustrated and even despairing.

Judging from what we have discussed above, training and conditioning people to work hard to achieve their dreams is not a bad thing. Nevertheless, it is not advisable to promote the importance of efforts regardless of one's own conditions.

文章大纲总结

一、首段：改写题目+个人立场

二、主体段1：表达优点

三、主体段2：在优点的基础上辩证分析缺点+例子

四、结尾：总结前面内容，重述立场，巩固观点

好词佳句

Ideology 思想观念

persuasive platitudes 劝说性的陈词滥调

talent and epiphany 天赋和顿悟

do sb/sth more good than harm 利大于弊

A case in point 一个有说服力的例子

be biologically endowed with 天生具有