23年四级作文模板课-第二讲-观点选择，更多的替换词

议论文

观点选择：

关键字：option choice，choose，decision

范文：

第一段

In the modern society,在现代社会

In the modernized world,在现代化世界的快速全球化

With the giant leap of technology/economy/

society,随着科技/经济/社会的巨大飞跃

With the rapid globalization of modern world,

随着现代化世界的快速全球化

With the rapid globalization of economy,nowadays youngsters/students have different option upon graduation.(阐述问题，背景）

Some think that to find a job somewhere is beneficial,while others think to start a business of your own is a better choice.(列举选择)

Personally,I prefer the former/latter.(做出选择).前者/后者

The following reasons can account for my preference.(过渡句).

第二段 论点+论据

social elites=elites in workplace=professional elites=scholars 社会精英

furthermore=additionally=moreover 其次

though=although=while=despite=in spite of ...，...

尽管...但是...

entrepreneurs 企业家（安戳破纽斯）

(论点1)First and foremost,there is no doubt that to find a job somewhere is more free.

(论据1)Based on big data,a majority of successful social elites admitted that their careers

(论点2)Furthermore,it is obvious that we can make useful friends when we have a decent job.

(论据2)Where there is /are job/work place,there is/are friends

(论点3)Last but not least,no one can deny that to find a job is easier than to start a company

(论据3)Though some people do succeed in starting a business of their own,most of entrepreneurs failed when they just start

第三段 重申观点+提出期望

In the word,to find a job somewhere is better/more suitable than B(重申观点)

If we spare no effors to work hard in our career,the future of our life will be promising and rosy （提出希望）

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