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四省联考

题目

你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：

1.音乐会特点;

2.观看感受;

3.意见建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

范文

This online concert is absolutely fantastic. The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song Liang Zhu. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for the students from China and our international friends to learn about and from each other.

参考

This online concert is absolutely fantastic. After appreciating the last program, I couldn’t calm down for a long time, words failing to convey my shock as well as affection. The concert, conducted by our two school, was really a vision-and-audio feast for all, though by a particularly special form — live streaming. What appealed to me most was that teachers and students from two school chorused the song Wanjiang, which made me realize the profound friendship between us and the increasing prosperity of China. I do hope there will be more activities like this to be held to rid students of pressure and stimulate their enthusiasm for art.