22年12月四级真题作文讲解

篇一

第一段

1.work out 替换 physical exercise

2.第一句话点题；第二句话提出看法(即和题目是一样的，非常重要，重要在哪，作用是什么。第二段就写这些内容。)

第二段

3.第二段，六句话，三个论点＋三个论据

4.have a great networking 有一个良好的人脉

想不到"networking人脉"这个单词可以用"make quality friends 交有质量的朋友 "

quality n./adj. (此处为adj.)

networking 人脉

5.doing sports 替换 physical exercise

6.vigor 活力

7.nothing but a choice 不过是一种选择

第三段＋全文

9.最后一段，提出观点，提出希望

总结

With the advancement of education, physical exercise is of extremely importance in achieving success at college. It is of great necessity for us college student to work out regularly. The following reasons can account for my opinion.

First and foremost,there is no doubt that physical exercise can help us maintain health both mentally and physically. Based on big data, most successful student elites have admitted that they work out at least once a week. Furthermore, no one can deny that working out can help us have a great networking(make quality friends).Where there is sport,there is communication. Last but not least, I firmly believe that doing sports can add vigor to our lives. Although we are not professional athletes, a healthy life style is nothing but a choice.

In a word, physical exercise plays an important role in college life. If we spare no efforts to be healthy via exercising,the future of our study and careers will be both promising and rosy.

随着教育的进步，体育锻炼对于在大学取得成功是极其重要的。对于我们大学生来说，定期锻炼是非常必要的。以下原因可以解释我的观点。

首先，毫无疑问，体育锻炼可以帮助我们保持身心健康。根据大数据显示，大多数成功的学生精英都承认他们每周至少锻炼一次。此外，没有人可以否认，锻炼可以帮助我们有一个良好的人脉(结交高质量的朋友)。哪里有运动，哪里就有交流。最后但并非最不重要的，我坚信做运动可以为我们的生活增添活力。虽然我们不是职业运动员，但健康的生活方式不过是一种选择。

总之，体育锻炼在大学生活中扮演着重要的角色。如果我们不遗余力地通过锻炼来保持健康，我们的学习和职业的未来将会变得既有前途又有希望。