托福独立写作结尾段结构解析与参考

2021-10-26 18:12 作者:HUGE托福 0人读过 | 我要投稿

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结尾，顾名思义，总结文章内容，作为最后的收尾。

结尾是完整的文章结构必不可缺的一部分，总结的内容可以是单纯的立场总结，也可以是总结+立场总结。

而在总结之外，同学们还可以将结尾段作为进一步体现语言表达能力的平台，通过一些扩展性的内容进一步丰富字数，深化主题。

换句话说，独立写作的结尾部分，可写内容的选择其实非常的多。

至于选择简单结尾还是复杂结尾的标准其实很简单：

一是考虑自身实际能力。

在自己的知识储备与写作水平的最大范围内，尽可能地完成高质量的结尾。但是也要注意过犹不及，避免在结尾部分出现看上去高级、但是准确性不确定的表述，这会得不偿失；

二则是考虑剩余时间。

作为整篇文章的最后一部分结构，结尾的质量会受到限时要求的限制。如果30分钟考试时间快结束了，那这时候结尾只需要再次声明立场并替换语言表达，简单一些即可。如果时间丰富，那不妨可以试着强化一下文章的结尾部分。

那今天的文章，会就结尾部分可以展开的内容作一个解析。

结尾结构·一 “总结立场+引用名言+畅想未来”

以该题为例，

When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school a month in advance, and you are required to write a presentation. Which way do you prefer?

1. To start to work on it right away, so you can work on it a little bit every day.

2. To wait until the end of the month when you have a good idea about the presentation.

题干问，当被提前一个月布置重要的presentation的时候，倾向于那种方式：一是立即开始工作，每天工作一点；二是直到月末有好的想法的时候再开始。

结尾的展开，我们可以作如下考虑：

In conclusion, my preference for working on the job immediately is justified through the above-mentioned reasons and examples. I am a big fan of the motto that to blossom in action or to wither in waiting. Let’s take action right away and never let our lives slip through our fingers.

“总的来说，基于以上提到的理由与例子，我对于立即工作的偏向是完全合理的。我一直很欣赏一句话，不在行动中绽放，就在等待中凋零，让我们立即行动起来，不要让生命从我们的指缝中溜走。”

这一类结尾的优势在于一方面兼顾了结尾的功能，也就是对于立场的总结，同时通过固定搭配的使用展现了语言表达能力；

另一方面，通过名言强化了论点，最后的展望部分，能够丰富文章内容，与立场呼应，同时，名言的储备积累以及正确使用也会是加分项。

结尾结构·二 “总结立场+总结理由+提出倡议”

以该题为例，

Do you agree or disagree: it is easier to maintain good health nowadays than it was in the past.

是否同意：现在比过去更容易保持健康。

如果使用第一种的结尾结构：

In conclusion, my preference for that keeping good health nowadays is easier than that in the past is justified through the reasons and examples given above. I'm a big fan of the motto that the only constant in the world is change. Let's take action right away and enjoy a better life from now on.

换一种结构也未尝不可：

In a nutshell, it is easier to maintain good health for people nowadays than it was in the past, not only because of a higher level of medical care brought about by breakthroughs in modern medical science and technology but of countless sports facilities which render regular exercise more realizable especially for city dwellers. But what is more important is that people should keep steadfast resolutions to say goodbye to the old unhealthy way of life and fully carry out their fitness schedules.

该结构的第一部分还是对于立场的总结，接下来通过not only because of…but also for …引入了对于理由的总结。最后则是结合文章具体内容，引申出倡议或者号召。这部分内容可以根据实际情况，来选择是否需要，不写也可以。

再来一题：

Agree or disagree, the world is changing so quickly that people now are less happy or less satisfied than in the past?

是否同意，世界变化如此之快以至于人们如今较之过去更不开心更不满意了。

假设文章立场选择同意，理由是环境差，生活节奏快。倡议部分的对象可以指向政府，要求政府来改善环境，重视可持续发展。

In a nutshell, it is reasonable to believe that people today are less satisfied than those in the past, not only because of exacerbating environmental conditions but of the increasingly rapid rhythm of life. What is important for governments today is that they should stop at almost nothing to achieve sustainable development and place emphasis on the improvement of people’s life quality.

以上就是和同学们分享的独立写作结尾段的可选结构。最后附上基础的结尾句式，单纯做理由的总结同样不失为有效的结尾。