诡秘外国网友评论节选意译 - 【945】
【945章（不死者-213章）故事的尾声】
Magicduckcommander
This is how a story should be! Now i have troubles reading the junk...
这就是一个故事该有的样子！现在我再也没办法去读其他那些垃圾了……
（回复楼上）reverof
At least you're just reading
I translate webnovels to Arabic and after I started translating it most of the others became so boring and hard to translate
至少你还可以直接读
我还要把webnovel上的英文翻译成阿拉伯文，在我开始翻译之后，绝大多数其他的书都开始变得如此索然无味，难以翻译
（回复一楼）Jmitch1
I literally can't find any other good novels.
我是确确实实完全找不出比这本书更好的书了。
（回复一楼）Archipelago
Since LOTM, my preference in novel become highly strict. If I don't like the story, I quit it midway. So I can relate with you hahaha
自从诡秘之主之后，我对小说的的口味变得特别挑剔了。如果我不喜欢这个故事，我就会中途直接弃书。所以我和你有同感，哈哈哈哈
Tukang_Sampah
Ince Zangwill had arranged a lot of people's story for his own purpose.
And now, he died because of a story (Play) arranged by Klein
I'd say that's a Poetic Justice
因斯·赞格威尔之前出于私欲，强行安排了很多人的人生。现在，他因为克莱恩给他安排的故事而死去。
我得说这的确是一种诗意的正义【一饮一啄，自有天命】
（回复楼上）BurntCabbage
Ince Zangwill's story is a poorly written fanfic about his horribly self-centered path to godhood riddled with grammatical errors and crappy plot holes. Klein's story is a beautifully crafted masterpiece with amazing world-building and authentic character development authored by the great Cuttlefish That Loves Diving.
因斯·赞格威尔的故事是部写得奇烂无比的龙傲天同人，全篇都是他那恶心的，自我中心的成神之路，中间充满了各种语法错误和蹩脚的情节漏洞。克莱恩的故事则是一部精美的杰作，有着惊人的世界观构架和真实的人物成长，由伟大的爱潜水的乌贼撰写。
Ozwin
I thought I would be much happier with Ince’s death and Klein’s advancement, but... oh Madam Daly... but right now my heart is occupied with Madam Daly.
我本来以为看到因斯死掉还有克莱恩晋级我会更开心一点的，但现在……啊，戴莉女士……但现在我的心里只有戴莉女士。
Alessan
Klein’s ritual is so difficult. All Roselle has to do was find a deserted area. That guy was truly the protagonist of his era.
克莱恩的仪式也太难了。罗赛尔要做的事情就只有找个沙漠地区进行仪式。那个家伙真的是他那个时代的主角。
Aby55:
Wow! Now Klein is a real god. I wonder how powerful he will be with the Grey Fog! A little confused if Captain's spirit showed up or what
哇哦！现在克莱恩是一名真正的神了。不知道他现在有了灰雾会变得有多强！不过我没太搞懂最后是队长的灵魂出现了还是咋的
（回复楼上）Alessan
It was just Klein using his Faceless powers to transform.
I really wonder what item is hidden up there too!
那只是克莱恩用他无面人的能力变的。
我也想知道那些魔药材料到底是藏在哪里的！
Randompasserby
Read this chapter again while listening to Shostakovich's Second Waltz.
Then picture Klein performing as "Dunn Smith" and "Daly Simone" dancing their ill-fated dance as a final tribute while Leonard watches.
The regret, longing and tragic fulfilment of the two lovers and the ones left behind, even after a successful vengeance.
....now excuse me while I go back snivelling in the corner again with a box of tissues. Care to join? 😭😭😭😭😭
一边听着肖斯塔科维奇的《第二圆舞曲》，又把这一章重读了一遍。
然后我脑海中浮现了克莱恩扮演着“邓恩·史密斯”，在伦纳德旁观之下与“戴莉·西蒙妮”跳起象征着他们坎坷多艰的命运的最后一支舞，作为最后的纪念的场景。
两个恋人分离，被独自留在世上的那个人，与伴侣间满溢的悔恨、期盼与最后悲剧的发生，即使在成功复仇之后，还是如此。
……现在请原谅我，我又要拿上一盒纸巾去角落继续哭一哭了。有人想要加入我吗？
Alessan
Wow! Adam even provided help at a key moment! He likely wanted to repay the favor of Klein holding 0-08 back while he fought Ouroboros at the beginning. If Ince escaped with the Quill he wouldn’t be able to advance to godhood yet (unknown whether this is his second or third Sequence 1 characteristic). A Sequence 1 Author likely appreciates a good end to a story too.
If anything the favor Klein inadvertently provided is likely much more valuable than what Adam did in return. Perhaps ‘He’ will provide something help in the future? Perhaps will we witness the ascension of a new Sequence 0 True God soon?
哇哦！亚当竟然在关键时刻帮了克莱恩！他很有可能是想要报答克莱恩在他开场和乌洛琉斯战斗时拖住0-08的恩情。如果因斯带着羽毛笔逃脱了，他就没有办法成神了（不知道这是他的第二个还是第三个序列1特性）。一个序列1作家很有可能也是喜欢给故事一个大团圆结局的。
克莱恩在无意中给他提供的帮助可能比亚当给的这些回报更有价值。也许“祂”还会在未来提供一些帮助呢？也许我们马上就能见证一名新的序列0真神的成神时刻了？
（回复楼上）lindatan90
Should be the opposite. Adam is the one doing the favor for Klein here. He has a lot of demigods under Him that can help Him to hold back the weakened quill and Ince. But none of them was here means that He is aware of Klein and left the stage clear for Klein's performance of vengeance and advancement deliberately.
应该恰好相反。在这里亚当才是那个帮了克莱恩大忙的人。他手下有那么多能出手帮他拖住虚弱的羽毛笔和因斯的半神。但这些人一个都没出现，这意味着他知道克莱恩和他要做的事，并且给他留出了能进行复仇演出和晋级的舞台。
DeadmanWhisperer
"This shot is for Captain"
I got goosebumps after read it and Madam Daly is my first crush in this novel 😭😭😭. The death of Madam Daly is the most beautiful I ever seen and the way Klein changed to Dunn is the most heart-warming way to ease Madam Daly death. Not to mention when Klein appeared infront of Leonard with his real face make the my hand sweat, with outstanding pale faced ince zangwill saw klein, Oh god.. this novel is so epic!
“这一枪，是队长的。”
我看到这里之后起了一身的鸡皮疙瘩，还有戴莉女士，这是我在这本书里第一个喜欢上的角色……戴莉女士的死是我见过描写得最美好的死法了，还有克莱恩变成邓恩的方式，简直是缓解戴莉女士的死亡带来的痛苦的最暖心的方式了。更不用说克莱恩还是用他的真容出现在伦纳德面前的，我手心都出汗了，而因斯·赞格威尔看到克莱恩时，那令人爽翻的苍白的表情……哦，天啊……这本小说真的太神了！
burntpotato
Just when I thought no other volume could top Vol 1...
正当我以为没有任何一卷能比第一卷更厉害了的时候……
Tetractys
Farewell, Madam Daly! 😭😭😭
再见了，戴莉女士！
burntpotato
*shot for mam daly, Leonard and everyone *
Me: Sobs
*shot for Klein*
Me: crying
*shot for Captain*
Me: wailing
*这一枪是给戴莉女士/伦纳德/所有人的*
我：抽泣
*这一枪，是我自己的*
我：开始哭
*这一枪，是队长的*
我：嚎啕大哭
Dr2cool3
Ahh this is what I wanted what a satisfying end
啊啊，这正是我想要的，多么令人满足的结尾
burntpotato
We won but at what cost...? ( ´థ_థ)
Spectacular end. Just brilliant.
我们赢了，但代价是什么呢……？( ´థ_థ)
无比壮丽的结局。真的太精彩了。
burntpotato
Vote all your stones for this book guys. Let's make this Rank 1 T^T
大家，把你所有的月票都投给这本书。让我们把它顶到第一名吧T^T
sexyvera
This is one of the saddest chapter of this novel for me... It takes you back to the first chapters... 😭😭😭
对我来说这是我读过这本书最悲伤的章节之一……让你感觉又想回去读第一章……
Courtaud
I love this story so much! You don't have to make your punches bend reality and create universes and random stuff to make a good story.
我好喜欢这本书！不需要描写什么一拳扭曲现实或者一掌创造宇宙之类的东西，也能写出一个精彩的好故事。
Shtriya
Damn this novel has raised my standards once again . I was already in trouble reading other novel . Now i think i might not be able to read other novel with interest .
Klein's ritual was almost impossible .
该死的，这本小说又提高了我对网文的标准。我已经很难再读其他的书了。现在我觉得我可能已经不会对其他小说提起任何兴趣了。
克莱恩的仪式简直是不可能完成的任务。
UnrivaledSolicitor
Demigod....From a no-name muggle to a Demigod in little over a year.....But hot dayum. What a hell of a performance. With one of Klein’s biggest goal accomplished, he’s nearing The Fool’s public debut.
Also, Audrey, Alger, and Derrick (Maybe Emlyn) usually are only a step or so behind Klein. Throw in Cattelya and the Tarot Club will have a minimum of 3 Demigods by years end, which probably jumps up to 6 by this time next year. Slowly, but surely, the Tarot Club is becoming a true powerhouse.
半神……从一个名不见经传的麻瓜，到一个半神，只用了一年多一点的时间……但这也太卧槽了吧。这个表演真的太厉害了。克莱恩目前最大的目标之一已经完成，愚者的公开亮相之日已经不远了。
而且，奥黛丽，阿尔杰，还有戴里克（也许还有埃姆林）通常只比克莱恩落后一两步左右。去掉嘉德丽雅，塔罗会年底就会有至少三名半神了，这个数字明年这个时候可能就要跃升为6个。塔罗会正缓慢而又坚定的成为真正的一方大能。
（回复楼上）Alessan
A step behind? Not at all. Only Cattleya is close to advancing. Audrey Alger and Emlyn aren’t even Sequence 5 yet and Audrey doesn’t even the formula let alone the ingredients. Only Alger is close since he has the formula but not only is he nowhere close to completing the difficult acting of Sequence 5 he doesn’t have the ingredients needed to advance. Almost all the Sailor Pathway ingredients have already been found and obtained by the Church of Storms as well. It will be very difficult for him and he has the simplest path.
As for the others, even if having demigod members like Klein and Cattleya babysit them in managing to find the ingredients they need (very difficult but not impossible) they have almost no way of obtaining the formulas. Every formula Sequence 4 and above is on tight lockdown. The Saints of their respective churches or organizations don’t know them and they are tightly kept in the hands of angels completely out of reach. The contributions they need to acquire are monstrous not to mentioned needing to prove absolute loyalty to their respective organization. It’s completely unlike Klein who got absurdly lucky and found his respective Pathway’s Angel in a predicament and in need of help.
Besides Cattleya it wouldn’t surprise me at all if the Tarot Club has no other demigods even two years from now. Especially as Alger mentioned he wanted to obtain his potion through the Church after accumulating contribution and drinking his Sequence 6 and 5 potions again. The Sanguine don’t trust Emlyn, Audrey has no contribution her Sequence is still quite low, Derrick has no way to obtain the formula and will have to rely on Klein to complete it for him and Fors is still only Sequence 7. Not everyone can be a freak like Klein either and frequently tangle with demigods just to increase the speed of his acting.
落后一两步？完全不觉得。只有嘉德丽雅快要晋升了。奥黛丽阿尔杰还有埃姆林甚至连序列5都不是，奥黛丽甚至连配方都没有，别说材料了。只有阿尔杰是接近序列5的，因为他已经有配方了，但他不止还没完成序列5的高难度扮演，也缺乏晋级需要的材料。几乎所有的航海家途径材料都已经被风暴教会找出来控制住了。对他来说，想要晋级一定是很难的，而且这已经是最简单的方式了。
至于其他人，就算有克莱恩和嘉德丽雅这样的半神成员带他们，能帮他们找需要的魔药材料（虽然很难但不是不可能），他们也几乎没有获取配方的方法。每个序列4及以上的配方都是被严密管控着的。他们也不认识各自所属教会或者组织的圣徒，配方都被那些天使紧紧攥在手里，完全无法接触到。他们需要获得的贡献数量是如此之庞大，更不用说他们还得证明他们对所属的组织完全忠心了。这完全不像克莱恩，他的运气简直好得有些荒唐，这么容易就见到了一个陷入困境急需帮助的自己途径的天使。
除了嘉德丽雅，如果塔罗会在两年甚至更长时间内一个其他的半神也没有，我也不会惊讶。特别是阿尔杰提到，他想要在教会积累一段时间贡献度，再重新喝一边序列6和5的魔药。血族们也不信任埃姆林，奥黛丽目前还毫无贡献，因为她的序列还很低，戴里克完全没办法获取配方，只能靠克莱恩帮他，佛尔思还只有序列7。不是所有人都能像克莱恩那么变态的，整天和半神兜来兜去，这增加了他扮演的速度。
（回复楼上）Grandelder
Agreed aside from Cattleya none of the others are even close. Alger at least has a clear path forward although it may take a while. Other than him Fors probably has the clearest path either through her teacher who's a member of the Abraham family or by getting Klein to free mister door. The others are stuck sucking up to organizations. Either that or Klein scries a couple of deities or Angel's to try and get formulas like he did with the sun pathway. After his run in with Zaratul he made it sound like he was planning to try that on him to get more deer formulas, now that hes a demigod it might not be too risky. There's also the blasphemy cards. I guess if they could sneak someone into the twilight hermit order to take a look at the blasphemy slate. The last one would permanently solve all their formula problems but is probably not likely to happen until they don't need them anymore if at all.
Also, it occurs to me that with the quill of alzuhod Adam might have everything he needs to go fo sequence
其他我都同意，除了“嘉德丽雅之外其他人连半神的边都没摸到”。阿尔杰至少清晰地知道接下来路要怎么走，虽然这需要一些时间。除了他之外，佛尔思也许是发展路线最清晰的，要么通过她那个亚伯拉罕家族的老师，要么等克莱恩把门先生放出来。其他人就只能靠从其他组织吸取力量了。要不就克莱恩去找几个神明或者天使蹭一蹭，试着像他之前搞到太阳途径配方一样薅出来点配方。在他和查拉图见过之后，听起来他似乎是想试着在查拉图身上再试试，拿到更多的占卜家配方，现在他已经是半神了，这事听起来也就没那么费县了。还有亵渎之牌。我猜如果他们之中如果真的能有人溜进黄昏隐士会，就可以试着偷窥一下亵渎石板。最后一个方法可以永久解决他们所有的配方问题，但这很有可能是等到他们都不再需要配方之后才会发生的事情了。
另外，我突然想到，有了阿勒苏霍德之笔，亚当可能已经把成神需要的所有东西都凑齐了。
