【83大盖】王菲老师的 作文黄金模板（已修订）

老余按：国内英语的考场作文，除了卷面占到半壁江山，

还有就是让阅卷老师感觉您这篇文章看起来很高级（←仅此而已）。

功能 一： 现象/问题 描述

... has attracted[capture] extensive attention of the society,which has brought us a lot of benefits but has triggered some enormous problems as well. One of the serious troubles facing us at present is ...

二：分析原因

1.总阐述

A number of factors might account for the phenomenon.

2.Perhaps the primary reason is ...

3.But the fundamental element is...

三：解决问题

总

In view of the seriousness of the problem of..., a serious of effective measures should be taken to cope with the situation.

分措施 government should establish some regulations to...

问题解决总结

“最后[finally=eventually,ultimately]，with the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly;    否则if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up and once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree,it will surely threaten the development of the entire society.

四：观点阐述

1.主旨

2.观点I: in favor of the idea of doing

3.观点间的衔接

There is a grain of truth in these statements, 然而 a close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.

4.观点II: 例子 can give the details of this argument.

五：观点结论

好 or 坏 in general 很难【difficult =arduous】 as it depends very much[exceedingly, intensely, absolutely] on the situation of,,, 然而，个人认为【  in my opinion =from my perspective、standpoint】...

六：展望未来

1.Is [Important= vital,crucial,profound, play a pushing role] for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, it can not only,,, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to... and eventually promote the rapid progress of the...

七：漫画描述

八：引语解释

There is an old saying...it’s the experience of our forefathers, 然而[however=as a matter of fact, while in fact it is the other way around] it is correct in 许多 cases even today.

替   换

2.firstly= on the outset ,previously,initially,

3.[adj.]More and more= on the rise

4.Secondly=subsequently

5.Lastly=ultimately, at a final point

Because(on the ground that)=on the ground that

6.Because of= on account of, in light of ,be responsible for

7.Many= an army of, a vast /considerable amount of

8.Pay/pour/ attach attention to= 

lay stress/emphasis on

11. big= massive, colossal, tremendous  

13.  always= invariably 

14.  dangerous  = hazardous 

15.so = consequently, accordingly,hence,

16.  people =  individuals, characters, folks   

17.improve=promote,enhance, reinforce,strengthen,  

18.aspect=   dimension, sphere

19.cause=    give rise to, lead to, result in 

20.want =desire 

1.remember  = bear in mind that