【雅思总分9斯坦福学长】7节课突破雅思写作7分 - Task 2 / Part

9分，p1 3分；p2 2/3 6分

考试的时候从p2 开始写

# whatever works for you is the best porch

historical attractions历史吸引, extent程度

评分：切题，逻辑结构，表达方式，语法结构。

目标6.5

02 结构

5 paragraphs

官方要求250字，目标6分的至少写300字以上，最好350字

高分的话需要充分回答题干里的点，dimension要广

clear清晰, cohesive联结有逻辑, idiomatic复合语用习惯, and academic学术.good grammar ,a few errors

常见写作结构

intro

supporting list

opposing list

conclusion

常见错误示范

题目：women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. some people think it is right to exclude males and females from certain professions because of their gender.

to extent do you agree or disagree?

7分

03

写好一边论点先

储备观点库a reservoir of high-level point——《macro，expandable, compatible兼容》

concession让步：引出对方观点，然后驳斥他

总结

选一边论点写！

观点开题要大，后面越写越细，一个观点就写出一段了《老大和他的小崽崽们》

其中一个小兵拿来驳斥反方论点

p4