老白 | 中秋特辑 帮李华写篇高分英语作文

0️⃣邀请信

李华邀请国外的好友David来中一起共度中秋节。

• 首段：开门见山说明写作目的
• 主体：when + what + why
• 结尾：再次邀请，期待回复

1️⃣首段

1. How have you been?

2. It would be pleasant to have you here. 万能句式！

3. Let's get / have sth done做某事

Dear David，

How have you been? It would be pleasant to have you here on Mid-Autumn Festival. Let's get you prepared for Chinese culture beforehand（预先）.

have / get something done means that someone does something for you.：某人为你做某事

• My friend had his nose broken playing football.

2️⃣主体

when

农历日期的表达：序数词+lunar month/ lunar calendar

万能句式：节日 + falls on + 日期

The Mid-Autuwmn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month.

端午节 五月初五

Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month / calendar.

大招：合并句子，短句变长句

when / on which 从句用起来！

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month when the moon is the fullest and brightest of the whole year.

what

妙招：as用起来！

• Li Hua，as one of the laziest students，l have ever seen，is asking for help again.

换sth做主语

Moon cakes，as indispensable（不可或缺）delieious food of the festival，are chosen as gifts sent to relatives and friends（后置定语）.

why

万能句式：Legend has it that......

Legend has it that Chang'e，a beautiful Lady，drank the elixir（灵丹妙药）which can makes human immortal and flew to the moon.

万能句式：

• legend has it that …
• Story has it that …
• Rumor has it that …：据说 / 谣传 …
• e.g. ：Kumor has it that Li Hua has no brain.

3️⃣结尾

邀请信结尾万能句式：

• l am looking forward to your coming.
• l am longing to see you soon.

I am looking forward to your coming and hope you have a pleasant trip.

Best wishes

Li Hua