【雅思总分9斯坦福学长】7节课突破雅思写作7分 - Task 2 / Pa...

结构，宏观到微观层层递进，讲细充分论据，所有分论点支持总论点

镶嵌结构，先写结果，再写影响，字数不够解释必要名词(what how why)

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take the case that 考研national post graduate entrance examination 专升本 upgrade from college ,as a result,studengts who promote their academic qualifications receive more resonable occupations.

had it not been long.term career grown, the choice of the students future would be very limited.

furthermore,the face that email has more advantages due to its low cost indicates that email has more advantages.

take the case of 学校招生办scool admission office，who receives applications in different areas online.as a result,this solution stimulate school efficiency and also make the process more convenient.

had it not been for emil connectnion,solving office documents would never been such proficient.

furthermore,the fact that email transport messages from distance indicats that email has nore disadvantages.

take the case of 视频通话video talk，面对面谈话，which people would prefer to change their ideas more efficiency and flexibility.making people more close to each other.

had it not been for communicating in a more directly way,message transport would hardly satisfing humans' emotional requirements.

写错了，应该写坏处,如果不是email人们的距离不会如此之远