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Vocab 7 How to prepare a fixed beginning
(问候+表明身份+背景阐述+观点/立场/选择/修改处)
第一次给对方写信:Hope this email finds you well.
回复已经有邮件来往的人:Hope all is well with you.
自我介绍:I’m Li Ming, a senior in Mingqi High School
交代写作目的:Inasmuch as..., hereby I am writing to verbalize/put forth/ventilate my opinion/ipse dixit/suggestion
立场陈述:
1.A, insofar as I suppose, unambiguously dwarfs B and C in the aspects listed infra.
2.As far as ..., ..., and ... are concerned, A is unambiguously the optimum choice. For details/detailed explanations/specifics please see infra.
3.It is in ... and ... that your draft arrangement could be amended and made better. Please scrutinize the approaches and reasons listed below.
4. Insofar as I suppose, be it in ..., ..., and ..., B and C pale in comparison with A.
e.g.
a)假设你是明启中学的高三学生王佳,你学校的教师 Lucy 准备在高中开设“信息素养”(information literacy)的课程。课程包含以下四个板块:“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、“辨别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写一份电子邮件,要求: 1.选择两个你感兴趣的版块
2.说明选择这两个板块的理由
【选择型】
Hope this email finds you well. I am Wang Jia, a senior in Mingqi High School. Inasmuch as you are about to set up an “information literacy” course, and now soliciting preferences, I am writing to verbalize my ipse dixit. Insofar as I see,“Big Data Analysis”as well as “Accurate Information Searching” unambiguously dwarf the other two for the reasons listed infra.
b) 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王缴,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)。
Hope this email finds you well. I am Wang Min, a sophomore in high school.Inasmuch as you are about to hold a painting exhibition, and now soliciting preferences from the public about where to hold it, I am writing to put forth my personal choice. Insofar as I see, the museum is optimum in both professional degree and access convenience. For detailed explanations please see infra.
(最后一篇例子是23虹口一模,可以在水水同名小红书看到)