摘要：为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔，用最正统的4段式写作，本文主题-地图：学校变迁，共183词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们，可以好好研读模仿。

相比较雅思大作文，网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少，质量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鸭，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要图表类范文的指导，所以，请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。最难题型之一地图：学校变迁，共183词，band 9。考官的四段套路：introduction+review+2 details。

话题：

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.(Source: Official IELTS Practice Materials 2)       

范文

The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024.

It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students.