【续写救命视频】2023届考前叮嘱&押题——续写可能提5分以上

升华写法

1.儿子，女儿态度转变

• 【万能】It was at that moment that my son realized the meaning of sharing.
• Now, my son is no longer the one he used to be.Every time he is willing to share things with me, I was overwhelmed with joy for his change.

2.传递善意（做公益）(pay the kindness forward)

• 【万能】Only when we pay the kindness forward can our world become a more harmonious one.
• From then on, I have been making every endeavor(努力) to offer a helping hand to those in need, paying the kindness forward.
• The sight of the children's satisfied looks fueled my determination to continue my voluntary work for them.

3.善有善报

• It finally dawned(开始清楚) on me that kindness will be definitely repaid with kindness.
• 【谚语】A kind act will be well rewarded. /No good deed ever goes unrewarded.

4.坚持不懈、梦想

• Only with determination and perseverance can we fulfill our dream.
• From that day on, I bear in mind that perseverance can help us conquer any difficulty in the way.
• Perseverance is what is takes to accomplish your goal.

5.一个物品所带来的意义

• This cup that my mom gave me was not only a Christmas gift, but also served as a lesson of/that ...
• I still keep that cup, as it reminds me of the unforgettable day and the meaning of ...

6.同学关系

• 嘲笑同学后来觉得自己不对
• Those who had laughed at Tom eventually realized that everyone should be treated equally.
• 同学间比赛分组出现隔阂（23GD二模）
• I finally knew that we achieved something more significant than the prize — a lifelong friendship and the spirit of cooperation.
• Though we didn't win the prize, we were still overwhelmed with delight because we knew friendship is of greater importance than the victory itself.