23年3月四六级作文预测 一明星偶像榜样，用模板如何与别人写的不一样

题目一(四级难度)

㈠模板写作

第一段

①opinion 可替换 option

②look up 仰视，尊重；崇拜

③former 前者

latter 后者

④第一段:首先罗列阐述背景，其次告诉我们有哪些观点，然后再A和B两个观点之间做出选择。过渡句“以下原因可以解释我的偏好。”

第二段

①逻辑词可按照顺序进行相应的替换(例如:firstly—in the first place)

黄金圣衣句型也可以进行替换

Ⅰ.补充：倒数第二句黄金圣衣句型少打了个"e" →No one can deny that

②personality 名人

③“基于大数据……”句型的替换句式↑

④⚠️注意谚语中的"…is a…"对应的形式一定要写上，即单复数

→如果是单数的话就是"…a…"，但是不可数名词就不要加"a"；如果是复数的话，be动词要变成"are"

⑤instead of 与其……不如……

⑥positive attributes 积极特质

(注：论点3"in the celebrities they follow"可根据相应文章进行变化，例如：in video games )

非模板写作文章↑

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㈠模板

Nowadays youngsters have different options upon celebrities to look up.Some thinks that to follow an idol as role model is beneficial,while others think celebrities often set a bad example. Personally, I prefer the former. The following reasons can account for my preference.

In the first place,there is no doubt that not all celebrities set a bad example for teenagers.(论点 1) According to a most recent report, many famous personalities use their platforms to promote positive messages and encourage their followers to do good.(论据1)Furthermore, I firmly believe that it is important to understand that teenagers have their own individual personalities and opinions.(论点 2 )Where there are opinions, there are communications.(论据2 ) Last but not least, instead of solely relying on celebrities as role models,parents can help their children identify positive attributes in the celebrities they follow.(论点3 )The more parents guide their children, the better role model their children will have.(论据 3)

In conclusion, while it is true that some celebrities may set a bad example for teenagers, it is unfair to generalize all celebrities as poor role models. If we try our utmost to guide teenagers with positive value, the future of our life will be promising and rosy.

如今年轻人对名人有不同的选择。一些人认为以偶像为榜样是有益的，而另一些人则认为名人往往会树立坏榜样。就我个人而言，我更喜欢前者。以下原因可以解释我的偏好。

首先，毫无疑问，不是所有的名人都给青少年树立了坏榜样。(论点1)根据最近的一份报告，许多名人利用他们的平台宣传积极的信息，并鼓励他们的追随者做好事(论据1)此外，我坚信了解青少年有他们自己的个性和观点是很重要的。(论点2)有意见就有交流。(论据2)最后但并非最不重要的是，父母可以帮助孩子识别他们偶像的积极属性，而不是仅仅依靠名人作为榜样。(论点3)父母引导孩子越多，孩子就会有更好的榜样。(论据 3)

总之，虽然一些名人确实为青少年树立了不好的榜样，但把所有名人都概括为糟糕的榜样是不公平的。如果我们尽最大努力用积极的价值观来引导青少年，我们生活的未来将是光明的。

㈡非模板

In today's society, it is common for teenagers to have a celebrity who they look up to as a role model. While some people argue that this is not a good idea because celebrities often set a bad example, I believe that it is not fair to generalize all celebrities as poor role models.

Firstly,not all celebrities set a bad example for teenagers. Many famous personalities use

Secondly, it is important to remember that parents and guardians play a vital role in shaping a teenager's beliefs and values. Instead of solely relying on celebrities as role models, parents should have open communication with their children and teach them about the importance of critical thinking and making their own decisions.

In conclusion,while it is true that some celebrities may set a bad example for teenagers, it is unfair to generalize all celebrities as poor role models. Teenagers should be encouraged to choose role models based on their positive attributes and parents should take an active role in shaping their children's beliefs and values.

在当今社会，青少年有一个他们尊敬的名人作为榜样是很常见的。虽然有些人认为这不是一个好主意，因为名人通常都是坏榜样，但我认为把所有名人都概括为坏榜样是不公平的。

首先，并不是所有的名人都给青少年树立了不好的榜样。许多名人利用他们的平台宣传积极的信息，并鼓励他们的粉丝做好事。例如，像艾玛·沃特森和安吉丽娜·朱莉这样的名人利用自己的名气来倡导妇女权利和人道主义事业。这样的榜样激励青少年负责任，对世界产生积极的影响。

其次，重要的是要记住，父母和监护人在塑造青少年的信仰和价值观方面起着至关重要的作用。父母不应该仅仅依靠名人作为榜样，而是应该与孩子进行开放的交流，并告诉他们名人的重要性批判性思维，自己做决定。

总之，虽然一些名人确实为青少年树立了不好的榜样，但把所有名人都概括为糟糕的榜样是不公平的。应该鼓励青少年根据他们的积极品质来选择榜样，父母应该在塑造孩子的信仰和价值观方面发挥积极作用。