写作-body段
第一句:我的观点
1总结表达正面话题的词组和具体的好处(范文)
1) A be of great benefit / significance / importance to B in modern society
2)A is key to B
3)A lay solid foundation for us to do sth :奠定了良好的基础
4)A exert a beneficial effect on B
2句句都点题,点题不重复(主题词多变)
1)主题词: adj +主题词
make efforts / exert personal endeavor
2)the quality / attitude / mindset / method of
3)同义词
diligence = industriousness = hard work
4)动词短语
5)上下义词
reading
booking learning
reading various books from different fields
keeping a good habit of reading
reading books in a feasible plan
3五大弘扬句式
句式结构1:主题词+ can transform one's way of thinking and living in a positive way , and people in an increasing number have become practitioners (践行者) of +主题词( such quality 这种品质)(万能)(第二个好处)
句式结构2:the importance of +主题词 cannot be overstated / overrated / overemphasized .
句式结构3:in the face of a and a1, b is c
a difficulties ; adversity ; failure ; frustration ; setbacks ; challenges ; painstaking task ; suffering ; dilemma ; ups and downs ; helplessness ; isolation
b =主题词
c effective medicine ; powerful weapon ; eventual optione
举例: what I hold is that the importance of mutual help cannot be overstated in modern society full of indifference (主题词反义词) and in the face of
helplessness and isolation , offering help to others is an effective weapon .
It is a well - accepted truth that the importance of diligence cannot be overstated during our life and in the face of laziness and setbacks , making constant efforts is our eventual option .
句式结构4:没有什么比主题词更重
nothing is more important than +主题词+ in sth / in doing sth
举例: nothing is more important / pivotal than self - confidence in overcoming the adversity .
Nothing is more important than family - education in children's whole life .
句式结构5:一个人若没有这种品质,几乎无法取得成功
one could hardly attain ( adj = ultimate ; maximum )success without +主题词
4举例
1)逻辑词
for example ; such as ; for instance ; examples can easily found in our lives / history / the tales / in contemporary society ,
examples indicating / showing / demonstrating / reflecting this +主题词 are countless / enormous / various .
according to the survey conducted by China Daily , 百分比+ social elites owing their high achievements to +主题词
2)怎么编例子(成功)
人名,身份的介绍,取得成就. It is obvious what makes sb +成就 is owing to / because of +主题词
举例: for example , Obama , brilliant and noted black president in American history , has made significant contribution to American's advancement. It is obvious what makes him success is owing to / because of his strong belief , constant efforts and clear target .
●身份地位
●取得
●adj
●成就