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一、评分标准（主要从内容、语言表达、篇章结构）

1.完整性，连贯性

2.词汇，语法的准确性、恰当性 、多样性（一类文）

二、写作SOP

1.阅读文章

2.梳理结构（把文章脉络讲清楚）

(1)确认文段主体结构

情绪：消极情绪

转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰

失望：事情有了转机，但是出现了新问题

结局：事情有了最后的转折（结局要好）

总结：点题，呼应前文

从负能量（消极）→正能量（积极）

(2)简要提纲

Theme 励志--战胜困难

他纠结痛苦。

他决定参加。

他最终跑完。

这三句话一定不要出错！

（3）确认亮点

①环境描写

一瞬间，一种令人室息的..席卷了(ruled)...，一阵强烈的+情绪+击溃了sb.

Within a split second, a complete +n.+ruled the +环境+and a wave of +情绪n.+swept over sb.

（丰富词汇）

Within a split second ,an absolute

helplessness ruled the space and a wave of terror swept over him.

②情感描写

sb’s+心脏狂（fiercely ）跳 ,手掌出汗,内心有一个坚定的声音告诉自己要......

Ones heart pounding fiercely and ones palm sweating, there seemed to be an inner voice telling sb firmly that

(独立主格)

His heart pounding fiercely and his palm sweating, there seemed to be an inner voice telling him firmly that he had to finish the task.

③语言描写

宛如放下了心中的大石头，sb.感觉到了一丝情绪,他对sb说道As if a heavy weight had been lifted from one's mind, he sensed a glimmer of and saying to sb,"....."

As if a heavy weight had been lifted from his mind, he sensed a glimmer of hope and saying to me,"thank you for trusting me".

(虚拟语气)

结尾

It clicked that he hurdled his fear and fulfilled his potential, and the unremitting effort was worth it.

Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.（升华）

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