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七七 | 读后续写扩句法

We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.

我们挨着坐了下来，但DAVID不看我。

第一句：就地取材，文字接龙

• 接：他 低下 头。
• He lowered / dropped / hung / ducked his head.

• 接：他低下头，然后盯着他的鞋子看。
• He ducked his head and stared at his own shoes.

• 接：他低下头，然后搓手手。
• He lowered his head and rubbed his hands.

• 接：他低下头，然后开始哭。
• He lowered his head and began to sob.

• 接：他低下头，然后忍不住哭了起来。
• He lowered his head and couldn't help sobbing.

• 接：他低下头=他的脑袋垂下来
• His head hung down.
• His head was bowed.
• His head drooped.

• 接：他低下头=他不想被我看到=他有意躲避我
• His eyes avoided mine.

• 接：【情绪出现 / 浮现某人脸上】
• Sadness flashed across his face.
• A look of sadne crossed his face.

• 接：（DAVID不看我）很明显，他试图逃避我的眼神/他在犹豫是否要退出比赛
• lt was clear / obvious / apparent that he tried to avoid eye contact with me.
• lt was obvious that he was still hesitant whether he should quit now.

• 接：【我和DAVID挨着坐，他不看我】只能是我来打破沉默
• lt was l who broke the silence first. "David, I think it's not reasonable to quit right now”

• 表方位的介词短语或副词放句首
• ln front of me was his drooping head.

副词/介词短语/非谓语/形容词作状语

「动作」推动情节发展，让故事有始有终、有逻辑

「情盛」传递文章主旨，让故事传递价值、有意义

where / when / why / how / 无敌的with

• In front of me was his drooping head.
• He ducked his head to avoid eye contact with me.
• He lowered his head in low spirits.
• Depressed and helpless, David lowered his head.
• David lowered his head, depressed and helpless.

WITH＋非主句主语＋动作（非谓语）

• David lowered his head with his eyes fixed on the floor.
• With his head buried, l could tell that he was sad / frustrated.
• With head down and shoulders trembling, trying hard to hide his disappointment.

• He just ducked his head and stared at his own shoes.
• His eyes deliberately avoided mine.