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「林译小说式·歌词意译」All Falls Down

2022-10-04 23:19 作者:三级支流也是支流  | 我要投稿

  林译小说:是指清末古文家林纾(琴南)用文言意译的163 种欧美小说。著名的有《巴黎茶花女遗事》《迦因小传》,译笔哀感顽艳,《黑奴吁天录》《块肉余生述》等译笔质朴古劲。因其早而开风气,对世界小说的大量输入,而引发读者对中国小说正宗地位的首肯。译文虽不尽忠实原文,但简洁传神,时杂谐趣,颇能传达原著的情味。作文重视形象与情境,善以含蓄隽永的笔墨造境叙情

原曲:All Falls Down

屑作完成于2021.5


导引:英文——原版歌词

蓝字加粗——添油加醋意译歌词

绿字——歌词出处

What's the trick? I wish I knew

冀燕婉 混沌初开 

《母别子》:“以汝夫妇新燕婉,使我母子生别离。”


I'm so done with thinking through all the things I could've been

既虑事将竟未竟 那堪辗转徘徊 

《国风·周南·关雎》:“求之不得,寤寐思服。悠哉悠哉,辗转反侧。”


And I know you wonder too

既知子望予来 

《九歌·少司命》:“望美人兮未来,临风怳兮浩歌。”


All it takes is that one look you do and I run right back to you

如是窥子秋波脉脉 载欣载奔揽予怀

《卜算子·送鲍浩然之浙东》:“水是眼波横,山是眉峰聚。”

《归去来兮辞》:“乃瞻衡宇,载欣载奔。”


You crossed the line and it's time to say "F" you

既孟浪汝 望之阊阖外

《离骚》:“令帝阍其开关兮,倚阊阖而望予。”

What's the point in saying that when you know how I'll react?

既知我老生常谈 谓我不忿何怠

《诗经·王风·黍离》:“知我者,谓我心忧,不知我者,谓我何求。”


You think you can just take it back, but shit just don't work like that

既覆水夫曷收为? 悠悠苍天寂隐霾

《诗经·王风·黍离》:“悠悠苍天!此何人哉?”


You're the drug that I'm addicted to and I want you so bad

鸾翙乎其羽  卿耽乎其士 子曜乎其态

《诗经·大雅·卷阿》:“凤凰于飞,翙翙其羽,亦傅于天。”

《诗经·卫风·氓》:“于嗟女兮,无与士耽!”


Guess I'm stuck with you and that's that

蓁蓁桃叶 高冈畦栽

《国风·周南·桃夭》:“桃之夭夭,其叶蓁蓁。”

《诗经·大雅·卷阿》:“凤凰鸣矣,于彼高冈。梧桐生矣,于彼朝阳。”

Cause when it all falls down, then whatever

炽火兮焚旗 贞风兮摧台

《哀江南赋》:“炽火兮焚旗,贞风兮害蛊。”


When it don't work out for the better

夫竹染篪恸 谯萦埙哀

《小雅·何人斯》:“伯氏吹埙,仲氏吹箎。”


If it just ain't right, and it's time to say goodbye

彼其皆谬 樱笋时节植柳者百

《自贻》:“恨抛水国荷蓑雨,贫过长安樱笋时。”


When it all falls down, when it all falls down

城阙颓圮倾覆 凄凉绝塞

《沁园春·试望阴山》:“只凄凉绝塞,峨眉遗冢;梢沉腐草,骏骨空台。”


I'll be fine

I'll be fine


You're the drug that I'm addicted to and I want you so bad

鸾翙乎其羽  卿耽乎其士 子曜乎其态

《诗经·大雅·卷阿》:“凤凰于飞,翙翙其羽,亦傅于天。”

《诗经·卫风·氓》:“于嗟女兮,无与士耽!”


But I'll be fine

Why we fight? I don't know

何谩然?昧其殆

《荀子·非相》:“乡则不若,偝则谩之,是人之二必穷也。”


We say what hurts the most

怼兮似彼芒麦

《九歌·国殇》:“天时怼兮威灵怒,严杀尽兮弃原野。”


Oh, I tried staying cold, but you take it personal

澹如深渊之静 既系之舟徒慷慨

《鵩鸟赋》:“其生兮若浮,其死兮若休;澹乎若深渊之静,泛乎若不系之舟。”


All these firing shots and making ground

琐纷纭 兰因絮果迭代

《丑奴儿令》:“兰因絮果从头问,吟也凄迷,掐也凄迷,梦向楼心灯火归。


It's way too hard to cope, but I still can't let you go

独倥偬乎罅隙 蓬门安阖为君开

《客至》:“花径不曾缘客扫,蓬门今始为君开。”

Cause when it all falls down, then whatever

炽火兮焚旗 贞风兮摧台

《哀江南赋》:“炽火兮焚旗,贞风兮害蛊。”


When it don't work out for the better

夫竹染篪恸 城萦埙哀

《小雅·何人斯》:“伯氏吹埙,仲氏吹箎。”


If it just ain't right, and it's time to say goodbye

彼其皆谬 樱笋时节植柳者百

《自贻》:“恨抛水国荷蓑雨,贫过长安樱笋时。”


When it all falls down, when it all falls down

城阙颓圮倾覆 凄凉绝塞

《沁园春·试望阴山》:“只凄凉绝塞,峨眉遗冢;梢沉腐草,骏骨空台。”


I'll be fine

I'll be fine


You're the drug that I'm addicted to and I want you so bad

鸾翙乎其羽  卿耽乎其士 子曜乎其态

《诗经·大雅·卷阿》:“凤凰于飞,翙翙其羽,亦傅于天。”

《诗经·卫风·氓》:“于嗟女兮,无与士耽!”


But I'll be fine

I'll be fine-ine-fine, fine-ine-ine

I'll be fine-ine-fine, fine-ine-ine

I'll be fine-ine-fine, fine-ine-ine

I'll be fine-ine-fine, fine

Cause when it all falls down, then whatever (Then whatever, babe)

炽火兮焚旗 贞风兮摧台

《哀江南赋》:“炽火兮焚旗,贞风兮害蛊。”


When it don't work out for the better (For the better)

夫竹染篪恸 城萦埙哀

《小雅·何人斯》:“伯氏吹埙,仲氏吹箎。”


If it just ain't right, and it's time to say goodbye

彼其皆谬 樱笋时节植柳者百

《自贻》:“恨抛水国荷蓑雨,贫过长安樱笋时。”


When it all falls down   When it all falls down

謇凄凉绝塞 望美人未来

《沁园春·试望阴山》:“只凄凉绝塞,峨眉遗冢;梢沉腐草,骏骨空台。”

《九歌·少司命》:“望美人兮未来,临风怳兮浩歌。”


I'll be fine (Fine, fine, fine)

I'll be fine (I'll be fine)


You're the drug that I'm addicted to and I want you so bad

鸾翙乎其羽  卿耽乎其士 子曜乎其态

《诗经·大雅·卷阿》:“凤凰于飞,翙翙其羽,亦傅于天。”

《诗经·卫风·氓》:“于嗟女兮,无与士耽!”


But I'll be fine (I'll be fine), and that's that


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