读后续写背金句:035 热烈鼓掌的高阶写法
35 掌声雷动高阶写法
So perfect was his performance that I couldn't help applauding for him/ the audience all stood up and burst/into thunderpus applause.
他的表演如此完美,以至于我忍不住为他鼓掌/观众都站起来爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。
After a few seconds of silence, Bob took the lead in clapping his hands, and soon the whole class broke into thunderous applause.
在几秒钟的沉默之后,Bob带头鼓掌,很快全班爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。
Hearing this, the whole class fell into a sudden silence. But shortly afterwards thunderous applause broke out in praise of Ali’s honesty and courage. Every student cast an respectful smile at Ali, including his opponent Bob.
听到这句话,全班突然安静下来。但是不一会儿,雷鸣般的掌声响起,赞扬Ali的诚实和勇气。每个学生都向Ali投以敬佩的微笑,包括他的对手Bob。
Peter ended his presentation with a deep bow and then he heard enthusiastic applause break out in the class. As he looked up, he saw the teacher wearing an admiring smile and give him a thumbs-up.
Peter深深的鞠躬结束了他的演讲,然后他听到教室里爆发出热烈的掌声。当他抬起头时,他看到老师带着赞赏的微笑,对他竖起了大拇指。
Although Dayid was the last to cross the finishing line, nobody laughed at him; instead they burst into enthusiastic cheers and applause for him.
虽然大卫是最后一个冲过终点线的,但没有人嘲笑他;相反,他们为他爆发出热烈的欢呼和掌声。
Beyond David’s expectations, all his classmates were applauding and cheering for him some of whom even ran to embrace him. Surrounded by sincere kindness and congratulations, David cracked a broad smile.
出乎大卫的意料,所有的同学都在为他鼓掌、欢呼,有些人甚至跑过去拥抱他。在真诚的善意和祝贺的包围下,David绽开灿烂的笑容。
金句总结:主人公精彩表演、做令人敬佩的事之后,周围人为之热烈鼓掌表示恭喜或赞扬,可增加先沉默片刻表示惊讶、或重要人物的细节表现,最后描写主人公反应。

