23年四级作文模板课-第二讲-观点选择，更多的替换词

观点选择

The key word: option choice, choose, decision

第一段

阐述问题,背景：with the rapid globalization of economy, nowadays youngsters/students have different options upon graduation.

列举选择：some think that to find a job somewhere is beneficial, while others think to start a business of your own is a better choice.

做出选择：personally，I prefer the former/latter.

过渡句：the following reasons can account for my preference.

第二段  三个论点＋三个论据

论点1：first and foremost, there is no doubt that to find a job somewhere is more free.

论据1：based on big data, it is revealed that a majority of successful social elites have admitted that their careers are free.

论点2：additionally, it is obvious that we can make useful friends when we have a decent job.

论据2：where there are jobs/work places, there are friends.

论点3：last but no least, no one can deny that to find a job is easier than to start a company.

论据3：though some people do succeed in starting a business of their own, most of entrepeneurs failed when they just start.

第三段  重申观点+提出希望

重申观点：in a word, to find a job somewhere is better/more suitable than B. to start a company.

不遗余力：if we spare no efforts to

提出希望：work hard in our career, the futural of our lives will be promising and rosy.