【龙腾网】《仙逆》-书评
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Lil
This is a shining example of the genre. Although it can be difficult to follow at times, unlike alot of novels, which fall off part way, this one only gets better the further it progresses. It feels less like you''re reading a story and more that you''re peering into another world and following the struggle and Journey /Dao of Wang Lin through his life. I absolutely love the philosophy involved and the progression of the outlook/personality of the main character; In the world of Renegade Immortal it is clear to see that one must gain wisdom and enlightenment in order to cultivate to immortality. You can see the feelings and life experiences that the author has poured into his work. The characters are human, and their stories in their realness evoke real emotions. This is an experience you shouldn''t miss.
A must read!
这是这种类型小说的一个突出例子。尽管有时候有的部分很难理解，但它不像很多小说那样只讲了一部分，而且这部小说越讲越好。与其说你是在读一个故事，不如说你是在窥视另一个世界，跟随着王林一生的奋斗和旅程。我绝对喜欢书中所包含的哲学，以及主人公的世界观和个性的发展; 在修真的世界中，我们可以清楚地看到，一个人必须拥有智慧和悟性，才能修炼成仙。你可以看到作者倾注在作品中的感情和生活经历。这些人物都是鲜活的人，他们真实的故事唤起了真实的情感共鸣。这是一次你不应该错过的经历。
一个不容错过的小说!
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thecursedone1995
Best novels I''ve read are from Er Gen :d nothing else to say:D
The word count is put in place for me to explain how good this novel is? then it is like this:
This is the novel that introduced me to novels I recommend this one more than anything else:D
!IT''S GOOD PLEASE READ IT!
我读过的来自耳根的最好的小说。
我用计数这个词来解释这部小说有多好? 然后是这样的:好好好好好好....（n多个好）
正是这本小说让我认识了修真小说，我特别推荐它。
它很棒，请阅读它!
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Gudetama-san
This is probably one of the best Xianxia novel I have ever read and my personal favorite among them (and I''ve read a sizable amount of them). For me personally, one of the reason this novel stands out among its peers is due to the sense of realism and how human the world and its characters feel. More specifically, how the cultivation world is shown and how the main character is portrayed.
The World:
One of the fundamental concepts that underpin this type of stories is that the world is a cruel, dog-eat-dog every-man-for-himself might-makes-right git-gud free-for-all battle-royale deathmatch, which makes sense given the usual concept of cultivation. Typically in these stories, however, the world that is actually shown to us is all rainbows and butterflies, where the line between good and evil is clearly defined (i.e. the main character is always in the right and those aren''t with him are against him), and where nothing of real consequence happens whenever anything happens ever (other than to give artificial power ups to the main character/villains). In the world of Renegade Immortal, however, the author isn''t afraid to show that this type of world is actually dark, cruel and brutal; where the line of morality is blurred and where one misstep or wrong move by anyone (''good'' or ''evil'') can cost you so much more than you bargained for. This thus provides the setting with so much more depth since it creates a lot of room to explore deeper philosophical questions and to provide the real character growth in addition to portray a much more interesting world whether it be the world building or allies/villains to the main character.
这可能是我读过的最好的仙侠小说之一，也是我个人最喜欢的一部(我已经读了相当多部了)。就我个人而言，这部小说在同类小说中脱颖而出的原因之一是它的现实主义感，以及世界和人物的真实感受。更具体地说，就是修真世界是如何展现的，主人公是如何被刻画的。
世界:
支撑这类故事的一个基本概念是，这个世界是一个残酷的、狗咬狗的、人人为自己、相互竞争、并不断战斗的死亡竞赛，考虑到这不是现实的道德概念，这是有道理的。通常在这些故事中世界告诉我们，世界不总是美好和温和的, 善与恶之间的界线并不能被明确定义(即主角并不总是正确的, 那些和他冲突的人不总是错的)。其他世界里主角总是正义的一方(还要有给主角当人工电源的坏人)，然而，在《仙逆》的世界里，作者却不惮于表现出世界其实是黑暗、残酷、野蛮的; 道德界限是模糊不清的，任何人(无论“善”还是“恶”)的一个失误或错误举动都会让你付出比预期多得多的代价。从而为这本书提供更深度的设定, 因为它创建了一个巨大的空间以探索更深层次的哲学问题, 不仅花费了大量的文字描述了一个更有趣的世界，还刻画了主角以及各类反派和配角的丰富形象。
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The Main Character (Wang Lin):
The linchpin to the entire story, Wang Lin is one of the biggest reason why I find this story works so damn well. To start off, he''s the son of a regular mortal family with mediocre talent with above average intellect... that''s it. He''s not the son of some crazy ultra omega powerful all mighty being nor does he have some absurd unrealistic latent talent for cultivation... just a regular person with no experience with cultivation/cultivators. Thus, when he finally does embark on the cultivation path as a kid, he naturally is excited and enthusiastic to start. As he travels on that path, however, he soon realizes that (as mentioned before) this world isn''t all rainbows and butterflies as he once thought. Unlike many other stories, the author isn''t afraid to throw tragedies at the main character, where (as said before) his actions have real consequences and unintended effects for both him and the people he cares about. And also unlike many other stories, Wang Lin is put in many difficult situation where it is incredibly difficult to make the ''right'' decision and when he does make an ''evil'' decision, he doesn''t try to justify it like other hypocritical main characters. Thus as he claws his way through this cruel world and furthers his cultivation, you can tangibly feel his personality change and his character grow as he tries to adapt to new circumstances time and time again. One of my favorite parts in the entire novel, which is coincidentally what cemented this novel as my favorite novel, is when Wang Lin asked his old friend after a long period of time what the point of cultivating is since only tragedies have happened to him since he started and he laments what his life could have have been if he didn''t embark on the cultivation path. This scene, to me, demonstrated the most realistic and best character growth I''ve ever seen in any cultivation novel I''ve read.
主角(王林):
王林是整个故事的关键，也是我觉得这个故事如此成功的最大原因之一。首先，他是一个普通凡人家庭的儿子，天赋平平，但智力超群……仅此而已。他不是某个疯狂的超级强大的某个存在的儿子，也没有一些荒谬的不符实际的潜在的才能…他只是一个没有修真经验的普通人。因此，当他最终走上修行之路时，他自然会感到兴奋和热情。然而，当他走在这条路上时，他很快意识到(正如之前提到的)这个世界并不像他曾经想的那样是美好和温和。与其他故事不同的是，作者不怕给主人公带来悲剧，因为(如前所述)他的行为对他自己和他所关心的人都有真实的后果和意想不到的影响。与其他许多故事不同的是，王林被置于许多困难的境地，很难做出“正确”的决定，而当他做出“邪恶”的决定时，他不会像其他虚伪的主角那样试图为它辩护。因此，当他在这个残酷的世界中摸索出自己的道路，并进一步提高自己的修养时，你可以真切地感受到他在一次又一次努力适应新环境的过程中，他的改变和成长。整部小说中我最喜欢的一个部分, 它巧合的巩固了这部小说作为我最喜欢的小说的地位, 就是当王林修真了很长一段时间后问他的老朋友修真的目的是什么, 因为当悲剧发生后, 他开始怀疑他的人生如果他不走上修真之路的话会不会有所不同。这个场景的描述，对我来说，它向我展示了我所读过的修真小说中最真实和最好的性格成长。
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Brief Aside (The Story):
The story starts off fairly slow paced and hits a trough around the 200-300 chapter mark but picks up very quickly after around chapter 400. Overall, however, this novel is paced very well with the author balancing adventuring (faster arcs) with arcs that are more about contemplation, philosophy/enlightenment, and more about understanding oneself (slower arcs). In fact, the mortal arcs in this story are without a doubt the best I''ve seen in any cultivation novel as they are not only entertaining but also slotted very well between big arcs such that the reader can take a break from the constant action in the story and usually highlight a philosophical dilemma or a certain enlightenment. All in all, story itself flows and connects very naturally and more or less progresses in a logical fashion that makes it easy to follow and understand (with certain exceptions, one such exception being the ending). The romance in this novel is kinda meh, but it does serve to develop the main character more so I don''t have many complaints on that.
Final thoughts:
Of course there are a number of other reason why this novel is good, but the realistic world and the relatable main character is what sticks out to me the most. If you''re still on the fence whether you should read this or not, I would definitely recommend you read it as it''s one of the best novels among the multitude of novels out there (you''ll thank me later).
旁白(故事):
故事开始时节奏相当缓慢，并在200-300章的时候达到低谷，但在400章之后很快就展开了。然而，总的来说，这部小说的节奏非常好，作者平衡了冒险(快速的故事线)和沉思、哲学/启蒙，以及了解自己(较慢的故事线)。事实上, 它的主角凡人时期的故事毫无疑问是我见过的所有修真小说中最好的，不仅有趣, 而且在主线推进时穿插这么一条支线, 使读者可以在故事的不断发展中休息一下, 它让主角走出了哲学困境并得到了某些启示。总而言之，故事本身的发展和联系非常自然，基本上都在以一种符合逻辑的方式进行，这使得故事易于理解(当然也有例外，其中一个例外就是结尾)。这部小说里的爱情故事有点无聊，但它确实有助于主角的成长，所以我对此没什么可抱怨的。
最后的想法:
当然，这本小说之所以这么好还有很多其他原因，但最吸引我的是它描绘的世界和主角。如果你还在犹豫是否应该读这本书，我绝对推荐你去读，因为它是众多小说中最好的一本(你以后会感谢我的)。
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Lazar9123
My favorite novel without a doubt.
If you are looking for a novel where character development is taken to the next stage, well this is the novel for you.
Wang Lin''s journey is just one of the things that not only will you read and enjoy, it''s something that will change you as a person and you will definitely come out better after you give this novel a read.
Only aspect you might feel disappointed about is romance, which let''s be honest is quite bad, but also surprisingly pure. It is NOT harem, it might by definition fall under that category, but trust me it is NOT harem.
I don''t recommend binge reading this, I think it''s more enjoyable reading it slowly and taking your time.
This is my first and only review I''ll give ever.
毫无疑问，这是我最喜欢的小说。
如果你在寻找一部主角发展并不断进入下一阶段的小说，那么这本小说就是适合你的。
王林的旅程不仅会让你体会到阅读的享受，它还会改变你，你一定会在读完这本小说后变得更好。
唯一让你感到失望的是浪漫因素，老实说，这个故事的爱情情节很糟糕，但也是令人惊讶的纯洁。它不是后宫文，它的定义可能属于这一类，但相信我，它不是后宫文。
我不建议你一次性大量的阅读，我认为慢慢地、仔细地读会让你更享受。
这是我第一次，也是我唯一的一次评论。
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Timeless ancient Al6
Out of all of Er Gen''s novels, this one is probably the most well crafted, although not my favorite.
The story starts out in a slightly hilarious way, our MC is refused by a sect, returns home and then goes out to wander outside and finds his special treasure, getting badly hurt in the process, then the sect accepts him because they thought he was so sad that he couldn''t enter that he wanted to kill himself.
But this story is not comedy, although it exists it''s not the main focus.
this story is about a man longing for something so deeply that he will go to absolutely any lenghts to attain it.
It''s a story about the hardships of cultivation, it''s ups and downs, but also it''s intricacies.
It''s been said quite a few times in the story.
"If only i remained a mortal, i certainly would''ve been happier" or something of the like.
在耳根的所有的小说中，这本可能是最精雕细琢的，尽管不是我最喜欢的。
故事以一个稍微滑稽的方式展开, 我们的主角被教派拒绝, 然后不愿回家就在教派外面徘徊, 然后他发现了特别的宝藏, 在这个过程中他也身受重伤, 最后教派不得已接受了他, 因为他们认为他因其不能进入教派而伤心, 以至于要自杀。
但这个故事不是喜剧，虽然它存在喜剧情节，但它不是主要的焦点。
这个故事讲的是一个人对某种东西的渴望如此强烈，以至于他会不惜一切代价去实现它。
这是一个关于苦修的故事，有起有落，但也很复杂。
这个故事里已经说了好几次了。
“如果我还是个凡人，我肯定会更快乐”或诸如此类的话。
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Plot development with twists? check
Character progression? check
But this story isn''t traditional, and that''s why it''s so good. if you''ve read the other Er Gen novels, there''s still a chance you won''t like this, and that''s because of our MC.
He''s a genuine "cultivator".
absolutely ruthless, with no jokes and laughs.
you''re either going to love or hate this novel, so sit down, buckle up cause if you start reading you''re in for a very long one.
曲折的情节发展? 合格
角色的发展? 合格
但这个故事并不传统，这就是为什么它如此之好。如果你读过耳根其他的小说，你仍然有可能不喜欢这部小说，这都是因为我们的主角。
他是一个真正的“修真者”。
绝对无情，不苟言笑。
你要么喜欢这本小说，要么讨厌它，所以坐下来，系好安全带，因为如果你开始读，你就会读很长一段时间。
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OnePathSilkworm
It''s one of the best novels from Wuxiaworld, and this is also my favorite Er Gen novel, and I think it''s the only one in which the MC ends up with more than one female(this is not he part that makes the novel being better than the others).
Unlike his other novels, the protagonist tends to be more ruthless and bloodthirsty in the first few hundred chapters. Latter on it becomes similar to the middle chapters of Desolate Era.
The ending is especially good, unlike other novels it is not rushed and leaves no plot holes, but rather opens questions and leaves some answers to the imagination of the reader.
(Not a spoiler) One of my favorite chapters was one in which a certain someone claimed that the whole Renegade Immortal universe is the dream of the protagonist, in which he is caught due to his unwillingness to let go of his emotions. This and other philosophical chapters were extremely thought stirring.
The last chapter and the afterword are amazing, I waited for a month to buy them with Karma after the novel finished to show my appreciation.
这是武侠世界最好的小说之一，也是我最喜欢的修真小说，我觉得这是唯一一部主角不和不止一个女性在一起的小说(这并不是这部小说比其他小说更好的地方)。
与他的其他小说不同的是，在前几百章里，主人公往往更加无情和嗜血。后边与《荒凉时代》的中间章节相似。
结尾特别好，不像其他小说那样匆忙，也没有留下任何情节漏洞，而是解答了所有的谜题，给读者的想象力留下了一些答案。
(不是剧透)我最喜欢的一章是某个人声称在仙逆宇宙成为不朽的存在是主人公的梦想，在这一章中他因为不愿舍弃自己的情感而被抓住。这一章和其他哲学性的章节都非常发人深省。
最后一章和后记令人惊叹，小说完成后，我等了一个月才买到它们来表达我的感激之情。
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Master_Ryu
It''s a very very unique novel... One of the finest I''ve ever read in this genre!! Non-stop thrills and chills in this one fellas. The characters, story development, plot pacing is just perfect. None of those copy paste scenarios unlike other novels where you go through the same plot & dialogues again and again. Er Gen is simply the best! He''s set the standards so high that I rue and cringe white reading other one''s out there. Uggh. You''ve basically an MC who''s brought up into a cruel ruthless world where he''s just trying to survive and live in peace.
No , it''s not your typical xianxia cliche type story. Just a simple love story. I''ve laughed, cried, and literally gone through every emotion in this novel''s journey. Never a moment of rest on this one folks. Be prepared. Enlightened one...This is what defines true quality. Highly recommended!
P.S- Worth it.
这是一部非常非常独特的小说……这是我读过的最好的同类作品之一!! 这部小说给我带来不间断的刺激和战栗。人物刻画、故事发展、情节节奏都非常完美。这些都不像其他小说那样一遍又一遍地重复同样的情节和对话。耳根是最棒的!他把标准定得如此之高，以至于我为看到别人的作品而感到后悔和害怕。额...你基本上会被主角带到一个残酷无情的修真世界，他只是试图生存下去并和平生活而已。
不，这不是典型的老套的仙侠故事，这只是一个简单的爱情故事。我笑过，哭过，在这本小说的旅程中经历过每一种情感。从来没有一刻如此强烈关注一个角色的成长。准备好阅读吧，有觉悟的人……这才是真正的品质。强烈推荐!
PS -值得一读。
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shyevsa
Currently the best Xianxia that I ever read.
The character development kinda slow in the beginning but it build up quite fast. The boost from the beads also only happen in the beginning too, the MC then rely on his wits and hard work.
The action, the battle, the struggle to survive is really something.
after sometime there is plot armor in his cultivation speed tho, like when some "genius" took hundred to thousand of years to cultivate he become lucky and acquire the power in just few years at most its just hundred of years, even tho it always said that without good foundation the cultivation will just become "shallow" or something.
the bad:
There is some element of romance to, not satisfying one. but it is there, and one of the main story element.
and then the ending. it just too sudden, feels like the author just don''t want to continue anymore and then drop the bomb and boom... its ending. and an open ending too boot. just pick the piece you like and that''s your ending.
这是我读过的最好的仙侠小说。
角色的发展在一开始有点慢，但之后发展得相当快。从珠子的帮助也只发生在开始，主角之后的旅途都是依靠他的智慧和努力修炼。
修炼，战斗，为生存而奋斗真的很了不起。
后来的某个时候有疑惑他的修炼速度, 比如一些“天才”花了几百几千年修炼达到的境界，他因为幸运而获得的宝物使他在短短几年内最多只是几百年就达到了, 虽然书中总是说, 没有良好的基础之后的修行会难以寸进什么的。
缺点:
有一些浪漫的元素，但不是令人满意的。虽然它确实存在，而且是故事的主要元素之一。
然后是结尾。这一切都太突然了，就好像作者不想再继续下去了，然后就扔下炸弹，砰的一声……这就是它的结局。这么一个开放的结尾太随意了。选择你喜欢的片段，然后作为你认为的结局吧。
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Rippedyanu1
It''s sad, it''s brutal, it''s heartbreaking, it''s beautiful and it''s an all and all great read. It''s Renegade Immortal. A book that I would argue is the greatest work of Er Gen''s career.
It starts brutal. The MC is awful at cultivating, the cultivation world in this novel is much more ruthless and manipulative compared to other novels and you can feel the frustration of the MC. Our MC risks life and limb, as well as his fundamental well-being to become better. To become strong enough to protect those he loves without regard to the consequences and it shows time and time again in this novel.
Give it a read, you won''t regret it.
它是悲伤的，残酷的，令人心碎的，但同时它是美丽的，它是一个伟大的阅读，这就是《仙逆》。这一本书我认为是耳根写作生涯中最伟大的作品。
它开篇是残酷的。主角的修行能力很差，这部小说的修真世界比其他小说更加无情和狡诈，你可以感受到主角的挫败感。我们的主角为了变得更好，不惜冒着生命危险，也不顾自己的根本安危，只为变得足够强大去保护他所爱的人而不顾后果这一点在这部小说中一次又一次地体现出来。
读一下，你不会后悔的。
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DeyvyDenner
My favourite novel by far, the MC is one of a kind in the sense that he truly compels his emotions to you, and displays a subtle array of them, a very complex character.
The history is just amazing as well, it starts with the basics of the world but has secrets all over the place that interconnects in ways that you wouldn''t expect!!.
The fight scenes don''t seem forced, and neither do the emotional parts.
The secondary characters also get nice development, and the struggle of them about the main character (mainly the females) makes them all the more interesting
It has its tiny bits of comedy but it''s mostly a serious read, packed with feelings and a world so mysterious that you want to explore to know why things are the way they are.
The best of this novel in my opinion is the writing about the Dao, so poetic, simple and yet gaves you foot for hours of thought, really
A bit rough around the edges but a must read
到目前为止，这是我最喜欢的一部小说。在某种意义上，主角是独一无二的，他真的把自己的情感强加给你，并将这些情感微妙地展现出来，这一个非常复杂的角色。
它的世界观也很惊人，它从世界的基础开始描述，且有秘密遍布各地，它们以你意想不到的方式相互连接!!
打斗场面似乎并不做作，情感部分也不做作。
次要角色也得到了很好的发展，他们关于主要角色(主要是女性)的斗争使他们更加有趣。
它有一点点的喜剧成分，但基本上是一本严肃的读物，充满了情感的崩发和一个如此神秘的世界，会让你想去探索为什么事情会是现在这个样子。
在我看来，这部小说最好的地方是关于“道”的描写，如此诗意，如此通俗易懂，却能让你花好几个小时思考。
结尾有点粗糙，但必须值得一读。
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