英语【读后续写】如何写出高分好句？变身超级造句机~

长难句怎么写？

重点部分笔记

环境 动作 情感

时间/地点/过渡，sb., with sth. in one's hand, doing B, did A,doing C,feeling/looking…

动作

Sb.did A,did B and did c. 流畅三连

Sb.did A, doing B and doing C.

Doing B and C, sb. did A. 同时发生

(先/因)Having done A, sb. did B and C(后/果).

Sb did A and B, doing C(果).

After/Before doing A, sb. did B to do C(目的).

右先有后，有因有果

加情感

excited/thrilled(兴奋的) joyful/overjoyed(快乐的，欣喜若狂的)

amazed(惊讶的 ) delighted(高兴的) satisfied (满足的)

sacred(害怕的) worried(担心的) ashamed(羞愧的) nervous(紧张的)depressed(沮丧的)

Depressed and helpless,the princess cried out。原因/伴随

He finally found his way into the forest, exhausted but excited.结果

He brought back the princess, feeling proud and excited.伴随

加个buff/工具

with sth. in one's hand

with sth. on one's head

with the help of sb.

with a smile on his/her face

He climbed over the hill with a sword in his hand.

He, with the help of an elf(精灵), saved the princess.

加过渡

(情绪)To one's surprise/delight/relief,…

Hopefully,/Obviously,/Of course,…

To our surprise, he brought back the princess.

表“时间、用时”

马上：in no time,immediately

那一刻： at that moment/time when/ while/a

早/中/晚：early in the morning, in the late afternoon, the next/following morning

表“先后”

然后：(and) then, after that

不久：after a while, soon afterwards, shortly after, before long

最终：at last, in the end, finally, eventually

状语串烧

只要是状语，在三个位置上，都符合语法要求。如：

①With a sword in his hand, the soldier entered the forest.

② The soldier, with a sword in his hand, entered the forest.

③ The soldier entered the forest with a sword in his hand.

笔记只整理了重点部分。可能有不全和有误的地方，欢迎大家指正。🥰