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七七 | 动作描写思路和头部动作
1️⃣动作一拆三
男孩跳入湖中：
- 词穷版：The boy jumped into the lake.
- 三连版：The boy rushed to the lake, took off his clothes and jumped into the water.
Mac上了车：
- 词穷版：Mac got in the car.
- 三连版：Mac jumped off the bicycle, dashed into the car and closed the door.
我拿起书读：
- 词穷版：I took a book to read.
- 三连版：l immediately ran into my bedroom, found a chair to sit down and grabbed a book to read, with my hands slightly shaking.
2️⃣精准的动词
头部动作
看
强调动作（从短到长）
glance：扫视
- He glanced at his watch.：他看了一下手表。
watch：观看、注视
- She watched the kids playing in the yard.：她看着孩子们在院子里玩。
gaze：凝视
- She gazed at him in amazement.：她惊异地注视着他。
stare：盯着看
- l stared blankly at the paper in front of me.：我茫然地看着面前这张纸。
peer：费力地看、盯着
- He peered closely at the photograph.：他聚精会神地端详着相片。
look into one's eyes：直视某人
- I looked into his eyes and said,：“...我看着他的眼睛，说到...
强调动作（带有情感）
怒视：glare
- The old woman glared at him.：那个老妇人怒视着他。
眨眼：blink
- When I told him the news he didn't even blink.：我把那个消息告诉他时，他眼都没眨一下。（否定形式表示“毫不意外”）
强调结果
瞥见：glimpse
- She glimpsed a group of people standing on the bank of a river.：她瞥见一群人站在河岸上。
发现，注意到：find
notice
- He noticed him standing silently over by the window.：他注意到他默默地站在窗旁。
spot
- l finally spotted my friend in the crowd.：我终于在人群中看见了我的朋友。
discover
- On arriving home I discovered they had gone.：我一到家就发现他们已经离开了。
认出：recognize
- l recognized him as soon as he came in the room.：他一进屋我就认出了他。
动词转名词，短句变长句
At the sight of the police officers, they ran off.：一看见那些警官，他们便逃跑了。
She caught sight of a car in the distance.：她瞥见远处有一辆车。
We lost sight of him in the crowd.：我们在人群里看不见他了。
He caught a glimpse of her in the crowd.：他一眼瞥见她在人群里。
One morning, I cast a glance at the headlines of the newspaper.：一天早上，我瞥了一眼报纸上的大字标题。
She threw me a quick, frightened glance.：她迅速而惊恐地看了我一眼。
He cast her an admiring glance.：他向她投去钦佩的且光。
哭
sob：抽噎；啜泣
- She began to sob again, burying her face in the pillow.：她又开始抽噎，把脸埋在枕头里。
weep：哭泣，流泪
- She started to weep uncontrollably.：她不由自主地哭了起来。
《泪水的一生》
抑制泪水：sb. hold back one's tears
泪水打转：tears roll in one's eyes
眼眶湿润：eyes are wet
视线模糊：tears blur one's vision
热泪盈眶：tears well up
盈满泪水：eyes are flooded with tears
快要哭了：sb. be close to tears
突然爆哭：sb. burst into tears / burst out crying
眼泪流下：tears run / stream / roll down one's cheeks
悲痛欲绝：sb. weep one's eyes out / cry one's heart out
擦去泪水：sb. wipe the tears from one's eyes
giggle：咯咯笑
- The girls giggled at the joke.：女孩子们让这笑话逗得咯咯笑。
chuckle：轻声地笑
- The banker chuckled and said, "Of course not."：银行家轻声笑了，说道，“当然不。”
grin：露齿笑；咧嘴笑
- They grinned with delight when they heard our news.：他们得知我们的消息时高兴得直咧着嘴笑。
- He was grinning from ear to ear.：他笑得合不拢嘴。
beam：笑容满面；眉开眼笑
- He beamed at the journalists.：他笑容满面地面对记者。
- The children's faces beamed with happy smiles.：孩子们的脸上充溢着幸福的笑容。
snicker：窃笑
smirk：得意地笑
sneer：冷笑
mock：嗤笑
挤出笑容：force a smile
- She forced a smile and told me not to worry about her.：她勉强地挤出一丝笑容，告诉我不要担心她。
挂着笑容：wear a big smile on one's face
- She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。
满脸笑容：be all smiles
- Tom was all smiles when he heard the news.听到这消息，汤姆满面笑容。
突然大笑：burst out laughing / burst into laughter
- She couldn't help bursting out laughing.：她忍不住大笑起来。
- Seeing the funny picture, the whole class burst into laughter.：看到这张有趣的照片，全班同学都突然大笑起来。
从入口到吃完
尝：taste
- He tasted the liquid medicine first before she drank it.：在她喝药之前，他先尝了一下。
咬：bite / take a bite
- He took another bite of the apple.：他又咬了一口苹果。
嚼：chew
- One girl was chewing gum.：一个女孩在嚼口香糖。
- Rosa chewed on her lip and stared at the floor.：罗莎咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。
啃：nibble / take a nibble
- We each took a nibble.：我们每人吃了一小口。
- We sat drinking wine and nibbling olives.：我们坐在那儿，喝着葡萄酒嚼着橄榄
大声咀嚼：munch
- Luke munched the chicken sandwiches.：卢克大声嚼着鸡肉三明治。
吞：swallow
- Polly took a bite of the apple, chewed, and swallowed.：波莉咬了一口那个苹果，嚼了嚼吞了下去。
狼吞虎咽
devour
- A medium-sized dog will devour at least one can of food plus biscuits per day.：一只中等大小的狗每天至少要干掉一罐食物外加饼干。
wolf down
- That boy seized the food and wolf down it.：那男孩子一把抓过食物，狼吞虎咽般地吃了下去。
bolt down
- I like to think back to high school, when I could bolt down three or four burgers and a pile of French fries.：我喜欢回想高中时，那时我可以一气吞下三四个汉堡和一大堆炸薯条。
cram down
- l managed to cram down a few mouthfuls of food.：我好歹狼吞虎咽地吃了几口东西。
抬头：raise
- He didn't even raise his head when I drove by.：我开车过去，他连头都没有抬。
点头：nod
- "Are you okay?" I asked. She nodded and smiled.：“你还好吧?”我问道。她点点头笑了。
摇头：shake
- She shook her head in disbelief.：她不相信地摇摇头。
挠头：scratch
- He scratched his head and looked thoughtful.：他挠着头显出一副深思的样子。
转头：turn
- Meer folded his arms over his chest and turned his head away.：米尔把双臂交叠在胸前，扭开头去。
倾斜：tilt
- His wife tilted his head to the side and inspected the wound.：他的妻子把他的头侧向一边，然后检查伤口。
各种低头
lower
- He was so nervous that he lowered his head and loosened his tie.：他很紧张，以至于他低下头把领结解开了。
drop
- Embarrassed, the little boy dropped his head.：小男孩困窘地低下了头。
duck
- Hearing the footsteps, he ducked his head in the grass.：一听到脚步声，他马上低下头，藏在草丛中。
hang
- The boy hung (down) his head in shame when he was caught cheating.：这个男孩作弊被抓获时羞愧地抵下了头。
