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22下 六级作文预测 第二篇-谚语类 拙匠常怪工具差

2022-11-25 16:27 作者:镜若清明  | 我要投稿

六级作文预测 “拙匠常怪工具差”

题目:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that commenting on the saying "A bad workman always blames his tools." You can make comments,cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.


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想直接背范文看下面



🔹全文:

(加粗的是直接套用)

高亮的可以灵活变化

As an old saying goes: A bad workman always blames his tools. For us college students, it has an increasingly important significance: If you fail, you should not find a reason somewhere else but in yourself. The following reasons can account for this issue

   In the first place, we can' t divorce from the reality that our attitude plays a role in one' s success. Based on big data, most successful social elites have admitted that they have a serious mindset towards everything. Moreover, no one can deny that personal efforts make us stronger. Where there is effort, there are opportunities. Last but not least, I firmly believe that although the environment or outside factors can influence your success to some degree, it is your willingness that makes the call. The more serious you are, the more possibility you will succeed. 

   In conclusion, a serious attitude towards everything is essential for everyone.If we spare no effort to cultivate this mindset, the future of our study and career will be both hopeful and rosy


🔹行文分析:

第一段:

三句话足矣

  1. 重述谚语
  2. 套万能句+用自己的话解释谚语
  3. 过渡句

第二段

用三个点来论证对谚语的赞成/反对,每个点都是一句论点+一句论据

高亮只是因为那一句比较长

make the call 起决定作用

第三段

1.万能总结词+重申观点

2.提出展望



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