Simon写的小作文发现一个明显问题： 学写作要敢于质疑和挑战权威

Simon写的小作文发现一个明显问题： 学写作要敢于质疑和挑战权威

我的一位学员发现Simon写的一篇小作文过多的重复使用介词at 描述数据，这种敢于质疑和挑战权威的精神是非常值得肯定和赞许的，学写作很需要这样的精神。

那怎么来改进呢？ 好办, 问英文改写最强大师（没有之一）GPT-4, 下面是改写版，指令里特别要求不要用介词at:

The table presents consumer expenditure percentages for three different product and service categories across five nations in 2002.

It is evident that food, drinks, and tobacco accounted for the lion's share of consumer spending in each country. In contrast, the smallest percentages in the table were allocated to the leisure/education category.

Surveying the five nations, Turkey and Ireland saw markedly higher consumer spending on food, drinks, and tobacco, registering 32.14% and close to 29% respectively. The spending ratio on leisure and education was also most pronounced in Turkey, scoring 4.35%. Meanwhile, Italy exhibited significantly elevated expenditure on clothing and footwear, reaching 9%, a figure higher than any of the other nations.

The table indicates that Sweden recorded the least percentages of national consumer spending for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, roughly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain posted slightly more elevated figures for these categories, however, it exhibited the smallest percentage for leisure/education,registering a mere 1.98%.

我们可以注意到，GPT-4通过不同的动词来呈现数据，还有一个地方直接带出数据。（下划线部分）

本文涉及的指令均收集于雅思终结者ChatGPT指令集。