最后一次英语周测的读后续写（纪念一下我脑洞）

这里是韶夏，本来考完试就想上传的，硬是拖到了现在（出成绩前）www

可以算是有点偏题的续写（据我们英语老师所说），但我觉得这样的剧情不错，于是就顺着我的脑洞写下去了。最后是个不合格的分，但我也舒爽了，结果还是要重写一次的hahahaha这里放出来的是我原来的脑洞，因为不想千篇一律而产生的。

Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the  screen.To her disappointment，it was her      mom's.She answered it and her mom asked    her to be careful outsides.Disheartened by the phone,she agreed.After ending the communica-tion,Jennifer put on the red summer dress and went to the café where they would meet.With   time passing,she felt bored and took out the   photos of them.When she was immersed in     the happy times,her phone rang again.              Reluctantly removing her attention from the photos,she glanced through the number jumping on the screen.It was a series of strange numbers.She hesitantly answered it and it was a mature woman voice with a little familarity.It said she had arrived.

Just then,someone was coming towards Jennifer.Got suck into a wirlpool of the familarity,Jennifer didn't notice the person.All of the sudden,a hand appered in her sight.Raising her head abruptly,before herself was a familiar face.As tears filled her eyes,the words beside the photo blurred.The two best friends hugged tightly together after five years.When she was about to talk of the old times,she found Yui Fay was disappearing.Apart from that,everything around her faded out.She tried to grasp something but only the air.

She woke up.

It was just a dream.

In fact,She had lost Yui Fay.

其实本应到这里就结束的，但我怕英语老师看不懂就最后加了一句“They had not talked for over two years because Yui Fay had died from disease two years ago.”其实不加会更好的，有一种戛然而止的感觉（雾

我写着个结局的原因是，我觉得那么好的一对朋友，她们是不可能因为工作繁忙而不去和对方交流聊天，所以我为了改正这个，我就把实的写成了虚的。而且这个风格与原文会符合一些，因为原文开头是一句话为一段，有一种诡异的感觉吧，我当初是这么想的。

老师给的范文是Yui Fay出现了，带着Jennifer穿着那件红色沙滩裙再去了Barcelona.

后来老师找我面批，她说我一开始写得挺好的，结果看着看着陡然一个大转弯，猝不及防，不太符合正能量原则。（其实何为正能量原则？我觉得人物死亡并不违背这个三大原则之一啊）

最后的最后（出成绩后），我英语考得太差了。。。与我平时成绩有很大差距，可能心态挺重要的吧，，我考试一直处于兴奋状态，唠嗑唠嗑。。。就酱吧。