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读后续写「动作描写」手脚并用、拿高分!

2023-12-17 13:31 作者:萨霞  | 我要投稿

七七 | 肢体动作描写思路

2️⃣手部动作

举手

raise / hold up one's hand

He raised his hand to wave.:他举起手来挥动。

She held up her hand stiffly.:她僵硬地举起手来

挥手

wave one's hand

Gil waved his hand and the car moved off.:吉尔挥了挥手,汽车开走了。


万能的手:击打从轻到重

tap

Ralph tapped me on the shoulder.:拉尔夫轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀。

  • 轻敲、轻拍以引起注意

pat

She patted her dog on the head.:她拍了拍狗的头。

  • 轻敲、轻拍以表鼓励、安慰、喜爱

knock

She knocked on the door before entering the room.:她敲了敲门才进入房间。

  • 敲击以引起注意、要求进入

hit

He hit the ball with a baseball bat.:他用棒球棍球。

  • 突然而有力的动作

strike

The boxer struck his opponent with a powerful punch.:拳击手用有力的拳头击中了对手。

  • 强调打击的效果、结果

pound

Someone was pounding at the door.:有人在砰砰地敲门。

  • 重复、用力地打击


万能的手:抓取大不同

hold

He held the baby in his arms.:他抱着婴儿。

  • 主打一个稳!

grab

She grabbed her coat and rushed out the door.:她抓起外套冲出门去。

seize

She seized her by the hair.:她揪住她的头发。

  • 主打一个快!

grasp

Kay grasped him by the wrist.:凯紧紧抓住他的手腕。

  • 主打一个紧!

clutch

She clutched her purse tightly as she walked through the dark alley.:她紧紧抓住手提包,在黑暗的小巷里走着。

  • 主打一个紧!(“孩怕”/痛苦/紧张)

hung on to

He hung on to the railing as he climbed up the stairs.:他一边爬楼梯一边紧紧抓住扶手。


伸手

extend / reach out / hold out one's hand

The host extended his hand to welcome the guests as they arrived at the party.:客人们来到宴会现场时,主人伸出手来欢迎他们。

When the little girl fell, a stranger reached out his hand to help her back up.:当小女孩跌倒时,一个陌生人伸出手扶她起来。

He walked up, held out his hand and said: "Congratulations.":他走过去,和他握手,说:“恭喜。”


point at:用手指

He pointed at the empty bottle and the waitress quickly replaced it.:他向那个空瓶指了指,女服务员迅速换了它。

give sb. a thumbs up:竖拇指

She checked the hall, then gave the others a thumbs-up.:她查看了一下大厅,然后冲其他人竖了一下大拇指。

gesture for / to sb. to do...:做手势

The policeman gestured for us to stop.:警察比画着叫我们停下来。

clench one's fist:握成拳

She clenched her fists to stop herself trembling.:她紧握双拳,克制颤抖。

shake one's fist at sb.:挥拳头

He shook his fist at me.:他对我挥舞着拳头


耸肩:shrug

  • 以表不知道或不在乎

Sam shrugged and said nothing.:萨姆耸耸肩膀,什么也没说。

He gave a careless shrug.:他漠然地耸了耸肩。

拍肩:pat on one's shoulder

  • 以表鼓励、安慰、喜爱

The old man pat the boy on the shoulder.:这老人拍了男孩的肩。

He gave her an encouraging pat on the shoulder.:他轻拍她肩膀以示鼓励。

搂肩:put one's arm around one's shoulder

He put his anm around her shoulder to comfort her after shereceived the bad news.:在她得知坏消息后,他搂住她的肩膀安慰她。


挽胳膊:take one's arm

He took her arm and led her across the busy street.:他搀扶住她的手臂,引领她穿过繁忙的街道。

张开双臂:open / stretch / spread one's arms

She spread her arms and the child ran towards her.:她张开双臂,孩子向她跑来。

投入怀抱:throw oneself into one's arms

grab / gather sth. into one's arms round sb. with one's arms

Overwhelmed with joy, she threw herself into his arms assoon as she saw him.:她一见到他,就兴奋地扑进他的怀里

The mother gathered her crying child into her arms and comforted him.:母亲将哭泣的孩子抱入怀中,安慰他。


3️⃣腿部动作

根本就走不动道儿!

sb. is / was rooted to the spot

  • root n. 根(茎)

When he saw the ghostly figure in the dark hallway, he was so scared that he was rooted to the spot and couldn't move an inch.:当他在黑暗的走廊看到幽灵般的身影时,他吓得呆若木鸡,动弹不得。

As the teacher announced the pop quiz, the students were rooted to the spot, their hearts sinking with dread.:当老师宣布要进行突击测验时,学生们都站在原地一动不动,他们的心因恐惧而下沉。


(艰难版)

limp:瘸着走;跛行

l wasn't badly hurt, but I injured my thigh and had to limp.:我伤得并不严重,但我伤到了大腿,不得不一瘸一拐地走路

stagger:摇摇晃晃地走;蹒跚;踉跄

l staggered and had to clutch at a chair for support.:我踉跄了几步,不得不抓住一把椅子扶稳。

stumble:跌跌撞撞地走;蹒跚而行

The child stumbled and fell.:孩子绊了一下,摔倒了。

l stumbled over a rock.:我在石头上绊了一下

tramp:脚步沉重地缓缓行走;踏

They put on their coats and tramped through the falling snow.:他们穿上大衣,在落雪中脚步沉重地缓缓走着

  • tramp:n. 流浪汉


(缓慢版)

crawl:爬,缓慢行进

l began to crawl on my hands and knees toward the door.:我开始手脚并用向门去。

l crawled out of bed at nine-thirty.:9: 30我才慢慢地下床。

tiptoe:蚰着脚走;蹑手蹑脚地走

They tiptoed upstairs so they wouldn't wake the baby.:他们踮着脚上楼,以免吵醒婴孩。

creep(up / into / out of):悄悄地缓慢行进;蹑手蹑脚地移动

l crept up the stairs, trying not to wake my parents.:为了尽量不吵醒父母,我蹑手蹑脚地上了楼。

l crept out of bed in the dead of night and sneaked downstairs.:深夜我悄悄地从床上爬起来,蹑手蹑脚地下了楼。

sneak:偷偷地走;溜

slip:悄悄疾行;溜

  • v. 滑倒,滑落

She slipped out of the house before the others were awake.:她趁别人还没醒,出了房子。


(悠闲版)

wander over / into:漫游;游荡;闲逛

She wandered aimlessly around the streets.:她在大街上漫无目的地到处游荡

stroll about / along / around / through:散步;溜达;闲逛(take a stroll)

People were strolling along the beach.:人们在海滩漫步

She took a leisurely stroll in the park, enjoying the peaceful atmosphere.:她在公园里悠闲地散步,享受宁静的氛围。

roam:徜徉;闲逛;漫步

Barefoot children roamed the streets.:光着脚的孩子们在街上闲逛


(情绪版)

march:(坚定地)快步走

He marched into the kitchen without knocking.:他没敲门就快步走进了厨房。

stride:(有力、自信)大步走

His powerful strides reflected his determination and purpose as he strode forward.:他有力的步伐显示出他的决心和目标,他大步向前走去。

pace:(因焦虑或不耐烦)在...走来走去

He paced back and forth.:他来回踱步

As they waited, she paced the room nervously.:在他们等着时,她在房间里紧张不安地走来走去


跑?冲!

hurry

The girls hurried outside, climbed into the car, and drove off.:女孩子们赶紧跑了出去,爬进车里,开走了。

rush

When the bell rang I rushed to the dining hall at once.:当铃声响起的时候,我立刻冲到食堂。

dash

He dashed into the room to grab his coat.:他进房间拿他的外套。

race

  • n. 赛跑

The children raced to the playground to be the first ones on the swings.:孩子们飞快地跑向游乐场,希望能够成为秋千上的第一个玩耍的人。

storm

The children stormed out of the classroom after the bell rang.:铃声一响,孩子们出教室。


、她跑,她插翅难!

chase(after):追逐

The police officer chased the thief through the crowded streets.:警察追赶着小偷穿过拥挤的街道。

She chased after her run away dog, calling its name in desperation.:她追赶着她逃跑的狗,绝望地呼唤着它的名字。

flee(away):逃跑

When the bear approached, the campers fled in fear.:当熊靠近时,露营者们恐惧地逃跑了。

The thief stole the wallet and fled away before anyone noticed.:小偷偷了钱包,逃走之前没人注意到。


77来点睛:不走寻常路

XX one’s way

She is determined to make her way in the music industry.:她决心在音乐行业中闯出一片天地。

  • 体现某人通过努力克服困难来到某个地方或实现某个目标。


pick / feel one's way:小心翼翼地走

He picked his way through the dark forest, carefully avoiding the fallen branches and uneven ground.:他小心翼翼地穿过黑暗的森林,小心翼翼地避开倒下的树枝和不平的地面。

edge / force one's way:费力地走

  • edge n.(尤指灾难的)边缘

She edged her way through the crowded subway station, trying to find a space on the train.:她费力地穿过拥挤的地铁站,试图找到火车上的一个空位。

elbow / shoulder one's way:用...开路穿过人群...

He shouldered his way through the crowded street, making his way towards the bus stop.:他用肩膀顶开人群,穿过拥挤的街道,朝公交车站走去。


跳、跳!

leap(更高更远、迅速有力的)跳

We leapt over the stream.:我们过了那条小溪。

Startled by the loud noise, the deer leaped across the meadow and disappeared into the forest.:被巨大的噪音吓到,鹿过草地,消失在森林中。

hop:(单脚迅速的)跳

The bunny hopped across the grass.:兔子在草地上跳跃。

She quickly hopped onto the bus just as the doors were closing.:她迅速地跳上公交车,就在门关闭的那一刻。

skip:(愉快随意的)跳

The children skipped happily in the park.:孩子们在公园里开心地蹦蹦跳跳。


脚是个好东西,你要用它!

跳起来(迅速、意外惊喜地):jump to one's feet / spring to one's feet

Upon hearing the exciting news, he jumped to his feet and cheered with joy.:听到这个激动人心的消息,他跳了起来,高兴地欢呼起来。

Everyone sprang to their feet when the principal walked in.:校长进来时,所有的人都立刻站了起来。

挣扎着站起来:struggle to one's feet

Despite the injury, he struggled to his feet and continued running in the race.:尽管受伤,他挣扎着站起来,继续参加比赛。

摇晃着站起来:stagger to one's feet

Feeling dizzy and weak, she staggered to her feet and tried to regain her balance.:她感到头晕和虚弱,摇摇晃晃地站了起来,试图恢复平衡。

拖着脚:drag one's feet

He was unwilling to go to the meeting, so he dragged his feet and arrived late.:他不愿意去开会,所以他拖拖拉拉地迟到了。

跺脚:stamp one's feet

The child stamped his feet in frustration, expressing his anger and annoyance.:那孩子沮丧地跺着脚,表达他的愤怒和烦恼。


吾日三省吾身:

  1. 细品续写精选例句
  2. 思考词汇如何组句
  3. 思考美句运用场景


【练习】

  1. 他们在公园里漫步

They strolled around the park.

2. 她蹒跚上楼,爬上床。

She stumbled upstairs and into bed.

3. 他们喜欢在乡间漫游

They enjoy wandering through the countryside.

4. 示威者在城市的街道上游行

Demonstrators marched through the streets of the city.

5. 他在站台上来回踱步,等待火车。

He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train.

6. 婴儿在学会走之前会

A baby crawls before he can walk.

7. 那天路上交通不畅

Traffic was crawling that day.

8. 他双手抓着绳子。

He grasped the rope with both hands.

9. 那个男人受伤了,他瘸着走。

That man is hurt, he's limping.

10. 他喝得醉醺醺的,一路踉踉跄跄地(走)回家。

He was so drunk that he staggered all the way home.

11. 他一跃而起冲出客厅。

He leapt to his feet and rushed out of the living room.

12. 那个年迈的男人恐慌地逃离

The elderly man fled away with great panic.

13. 她蹑手蹑脚地走到床边,以免吵醒宝宝。

She tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby.

14. 他用肩膀在人群中挤出一条路来

She shouldered her way through the crowd.

15. 失望又沮丧,这个可怜的人设法回到了家人身边。

Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.

16. 猫悄无声息地向鸟儿靠近

The cat crept silently towards the bird.

17. 那个男孩偷偷溜进去,没有付钱。

The boy sneaked in without paying.

18. 她不情愿地跟在父母后面,拖着脚步

She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.

19. 她不耐烦地跺着脚,来回走动。

She was tapping / stamping her feet impatiently.

20. 她惊慌失措地沿着那条街跑下去

She ran / rushed down the street , trembling with great panic.

21. 然后,紧握着罐头,他朝商店走去。

Then, clutching the tin can , he headed for the shop.

22. 他向她跑去,双手抱着她

He ran up to her and put / threw / his arms around her.

23. 他伸出一只手,抓住她的手臂

He reached out a hand and caught hold of / grabbed / took her arm.

24. 他加快速度,不一会就把别的运动员都甩在后头了。

Quickening his pace, he soon left all the other runners behind.

25.她耸耸肩摊开双手说:“我只能告诉你这么多了。”

She shrugged and spread her hands. "That's all I can tell you."

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