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犯罪的原因 没有钱然后他们的生活无法被保障
One reason why some people commit crimes is that they do not have a job or any source of income. If the country does not have a robust/well-developed benefits system, they will not be able to maintain a basic standard of living. Consequently, they may resort to/turn to(求助于,诉诸于) committing crimes, such as robberies, theft, or drug dealing, in order to acquire the necessary funds for their livelihood.
犯罪的原因 贫富差异
The widening gap between the rich and the poor may also lead to an increase in criminal activity, as people feel a sense of unfairness and resentment. If the country lacks policies for income redistribution that utilize a portion of/a part of the wealth held by the upper class to support those with low incomes, disadvantaged individuals can experience a sense of hopelessness while struggling with essential necessities. Consequently, they might resort to committing offenses, such as damaging public property, as a way to express their frustration.
教育忽视小孩的行为,获得教育机会有限 ,不知道行为标准 ,犯罪
Another significant reason is the lack of access to education and unfamiliarity with behavioral norms. Individuals from disadvantaged backgrounds might be unaware of appropriate conduct. Some may leave school prematurely, missing out on lessons about laws and regulations. This lack of knowledge about the potential consequences of breaking the law, or an underestimation of those consequences, can lead to engagement in criminal activities从事犯罪活动.
基因 决定了脾气性格 等 ,犯罪
Genetics can predict criminal behavior by influencing one's temperament and character. A specific region of the human brain is responsible for regulating emotions, but some individuals are born with deficits in emotional regulation. They struggle to control their anger and lack empathy towards others, making them prone to violence.
家庭的疏忽,他们可能没有获得家庭的关心和照顾,没有管教, 犯罪
Negligent parents can also contribute to the offensive behavior of the younger generation. The young law-breakers might not learn proper behavioral boundaries during their formative years, possibly due to their parents not recognizing the significance of discipline. Children may exhibit poor conduct at school, and behaviors such as bullying, yelling at classmates, and using offensive language can escalate into serious offenses if not addressed by responsible adults.
媒体:接触暴力的信息 , 模仿 ,犯罪
The heightened exposure to violence in the media is potentially another factor contributing to crime. Individuals engage in games and watch films that feature动词,表示"以...为特色 violent imagery. Over time, they might come to perceive认为 violence as an acceptable means of venting发泄 negative emotions and resolving conflicts, or they may underestimate the repercussions of engaging in violent behavior.
预防犯罪的方法:
A 刑罚 b 震慑 C 减少犯罪
A prison sentence坐牢 can be an effective method to curb crime, as it acts as a deterrent(n. 威慑)for potential lawbreakers. The prospect of losing their freedom can make individuals reconsider before breaking the law. Some may not want to risk spending months in jail/A prison sentence and missing out on a normal life, which leads them to choose to abide by the laws/obey laws.
A 教育 B 提高就业能力 C 减少犯罪
The most desirable preventative(adj. 预防性的) measure against crime is arguably education, as schools enhance skills and instill(vt. 徐徐滴入;逐渐灌输) a code of conduct. Children can develop a solid understanding of acceptable and desirable behavior, learning from school rules, textbooks, and the guidance of teachers. Moreover, individuals with a strong education are more likely to secure satisfying employment opportunities, especially if they attain high grades in school and obtain a university degree. With a comfortable lifestyle assured确定的, the inclination towards criminal activities is likely to diminish.
A 社区服务(适合初犯、小的犯罪,青少年犯罪) B 提升责任感,避免犯罪记录的影响 C 减少犯罪
Community service is a potentially effective solution to crime, as it nurtures a sense of responsibility and alleviates the impact of a criminal record on one's career. This approach is particularly suitable for first-time offenders, individuals under the age of 18 who have broken the law, and those who have committed minor offenses. Through undertaking unpaid work within the community, such as cleaning streets and removing graffiti, offenders can cultivate a sense of pride in their meaningful contribution to society. Importantly, this form of punishment doesn't Undermine their future career prospects, allowing them to continue their education and secure employment like law-abiding citizens. Ultimately, community service can play a crucial role in preventing reoffending.
A 提升保安措施 B 震慑犯罪 C 减少犯罪
Enhancing security measures is another effective method to commit crime. The Increase of surveillance/monitoring cameras serves as a strong deterrent against potential lawbreakers, as the images captured by these cameras can be utilized as compelling evidence during prosecution. Additionally, an increased presence of police officers guarding the streets, especially when equipped with weapons, can significantly discourage offenders. This heightened law enforcement presence sends a clear message that criminal behavior will not go undeterred.
刑罚的好处:
震慑犯罪,减少犯罪率
Imprisonment/A prison sentence has a deterrent effect on potential criminals, making it an effective method to reduce crime.
保护守法的公民,不会受到犯人的侵害,特别是那些累犯(很难改变他们的行为)
Keeping criminals in prison can help protect law-abiding citizens from crime, especially the harm caused by recidivists(recidivism), who cannot be reformed easily.
教育和培训(或者只是做社工)的好处: 提高技能,他们可以找工作,重复犯罪的可能性减少,特别是对于年轻人
Young offenders who are given opportunities to enhance their job skills can secure employment despite having a history of misconduct. This can lead to a reduced likelihood of recidivism.
减少和一些累犯的接触,年轻人
This can help them avoid contact with repeat offenders.
让罪犯懂得法律责任和社会责任,以后重复犯罪的机会下降
People who are aware of legal and social responsibilities are less likely to break laws
避免犯罪记录对年轻人以后重入社会产生影响
Another advantage of education and training is that it can alleviate the repercussions of a criminal record on young people as they strive to reintegrate into society//make an effort to rejoin society.