2023.06.03雅思写作解析+高分范文
Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem?
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原因：
1.Convention, look after grandchildren , children preoccupied with work
2. awareness that prevention is of great importance than medication
3.The inadequacy of sports facilities, like stadiums, gums, fitness centers and parks
解决：
1.Liberate older generation from tiresome housework, more nurseries to give a hand to those young parents grappling with hustling and bustling city life
2.Yearly body examination provided by the gov, raise the awareness of preventing illnesses in advance rather than treat after finding them,
3.A large portion of Public funds should be allocated in planning and constructing infrastructure for citizens to do sports in their adjacent neighborhood
范文：395 words
With life expectancy寿命 of humans becoming longer worldwide, preventing illnesses in advance is a vital approach for everyone to have a happier and healthier life after retirement. According to the suggestions of doctors, it is favorable for senior citizens to do sports on a daily basis, which is, however, hardly followed by many aged people, especially in China. So in this essay I will dissect解剖、分析/explore the reasons of this issue and the possible/potential solutions to approach it.
First of all, China still has a well-known convention习俗 that the older generation needs to help their 20 or 30 something children to take care of their babies, who are also their grandchildren. This kind of Oriental东方的 familyobligation责任义务 confines禁锢 many retired grandparents at home, comforting babies, cooking meals and doing housework, instead of going out to do sports like their peers. Secondly, there was no culture for exercise in the previous generations. Unlike the life for the Millennials千禧一代, Baby boomers婴儿潮一代（1940-1960左右出生的人） and Gen X（1960-1980左右出生的人） did not have the awareness意识 of doing regular sports and usually did not focus so much on personal appearance个人形象 and their health. Last but not least, the inadequacy不足 of sports facilities and venues场地, like stadiums, gums, fitness centers and parks, is also a contributing有关的 factor of insufficient exercise for elders长者.
Based on the reasons analyzed above, multifaceted多重的 solutions can be adopted to mitigate缓解 the status quo现状. In order to liberate解放 older generations from tiresome housework and baby-caring, governments should sponsor资助 more nurseries幼儿园 to give a hand to those young parents, who are grappling with摔跤，应对困境 hustling and bustling city life繁忙都市生活 and having no time to attend to照顾 their babies. Also, yearly thorough medical examinations体检 should be provided for the elderly by the government. Chronic diseases慢性疾病 like hypertension高血压, diabetes高血糖 and high cholesterol高血脂 should be monitored监测 in the early stages before it’s too late. Furthermore, a larger portion of public funds should be allocated分配 in planning and constructing sports related infrastructure基础设施 in neighborhood adjacent毗邻的 areas. Not only should there be more convenience and availability for the elderly to reach out for sports facilities, but municipal市政府的 departments should also design more age-appropriate年龄适合的 equipment for senior citizens.
In conclusion, although there are conventional, mentality and governmental reasons for the inadequate exercise of elder generations, feasible切实可行的 solutions can still alleviate缓解 the problem and help more seniors to participate in dancing and hiking like their other counterparts.
