【一英】最强口诀，细数短文改错十宗罪，一个错都不会少！
七七 | 短文改错
0️⃣游戏指南
改：118原则
- 一处添加
- 一处删除
- 八处改正
- 每处只改一词
不改
- 拼写错误
- 大小写错误
- 标点错误
- 词序错误
1️⃣新手训练营
Tip1 ：现在or过去
①... There were two reasonsfor the decision. One was that l was amazed at the factthat a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor. And the other was that l wanted to help peoplein need...
②... In my opinion, students can benefit a lot from doingsome housework. Firstly, doing housework is helpful forus to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents moretime to do what they like and it improves the family relationship.
Tip2 ：现在or过去
… After that l poured oil into apan and turned on the stove. l waited patiently until the oilwas hot. Then l put the tomatoes and the beaten eggsinto the pan together. "Not that way, " my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right It didn't turn out as l had wished...
... In the cafe, customers will enjoy themselves in the historical environment what iscreated for them.
... If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books...
Tip3 ：并列结构
- l also water the flowers in the yard and tidy up my own bedroom whenever necessary.
- For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while l have to eat an apple.
- Many students say they will talk to their friends or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other.
Tip4：离个大谱
- After that l poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove.
- During my last winter holiday, I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I found a big change there... Last winter when l went there again, they had a big separate house toraise dozens of chickens.
秘籍1：通读全文、先易后难！
关注时态&指代一致性、并列结构、明显逻辑错误
2️⃣短改十宗罪
一宗罪之名词：数与格
- l always assist my parents in doing the dishes after meals.
- Luckily, l will go home in two weeks for summer vacation.
- My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family.
- lf we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books.
- When l was little, Friday night was our family game night.
可数名词单复转换；不可数名词去s；名词所有格
常考不可数名词
- advice：建议
- baggage：行李
- luggage：行率
- equipment：设备
- furniture：家具
- homework：作业
- information：信息
- knowledge：知识
- news：新闻
- traffic：交通
二宗罪之动词作谓语
- As a kid, l loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times l asked to watch them, my parents would not to let me.
- Still l was unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.
四种谓语形式要牢记
- 实义动词
- 系动词
- 情态动词 + 动词原形
- 助动词 + 动词原形
- Actually, l started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but l have long been out of practice.
- Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are used for cooking.
- One of the questions is: Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results.
时态、语态、主谓一致，一个都不能少！
二宗罪之动词作非谓语
- Now my dream is to open a cafe.
- My mom told me how to prepare it.
- lf l succeed in managing one, I will open more.
- Their answers also show that they dislike talking to others.
- All the football players on the playground cheered loudly, saying that l had a talent for football.
- l like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to...
三种基本形式：介词+doing；动词+to do/doing；ed表被动
三宗罪之形容词作表语
- I'm sure you'll have a good time.
- l felt happy that their life had improved.
- First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so cool.
- In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in ...
- One was that l was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel ...
主系表结构：-ed人，-ing事
系动词知多少
描述稳定状态
- be（am / is / are）
描述感官
- look，taste，smell，sound，feel
- “…起来”
描述变化
- grow，go，get，become，turn
- 3gbt
描述持续状态
- keep，remain，stay
表示“证明”
- prove
表示“好像”
- seem，appear
四宗罪之形副作修饰
形容词+名词
I. 副词+动词
II. 副词+句子
Ⅲ. 副词+形容词
IV. 副词+副词
- Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself.
- l enjoyed studying different kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and ...
- In my opinion, when in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust most.
- l stopped the ball and kicked it hard back to the playground.
牢记形副修饰“套餐”；关注词性
四宗罪之形副原/比较/最高级
- l was afraid to speak in front of a larger group of people.
- l was so much nervous that l could hardly tell which direction was left.
原级、比较级、最高级勿混淆！
五宗罪之冠词a/an/the
- Each of my cafes will have a different theme and a unique style.
- ... it takes them about an/one hour and a half to go to work every day.
- As a kid, l loved to watch cartoons, but ...
- l still remember how hard the/my first day was.
- Suddenly a football fell just in front of me and almost hit me.
- Then l put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together.
明辨泛指和特指，避免错用、漏用和多用
a还是an
看似用an不用an
- a unit
- a uniform
- a university
- a European
- a one-way trip
- a usual / useful / useless +n.
该用an时就用an
- an apple
- an hour
- an island
- an old man
- an orange
- an easy question
六宗罪之代词用法与指代
- Mr. and Mrs.Zhang both work in our school.
- ... they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and other animals.
- Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China.
- Only a few choose to deal with the problems on their own.
基本用法（人称/物主/反身/不定代词）；指代对象不一致
your还是yours
Your：形容词性物主代词
- 在句中用作定语
- 不可单独使用
- 心须与名词 / 动名词一起使用
Yours：名词性物主代词
- 在句中可用作主语、宾语、表语
- 可单独使用
- 后面不能再接名词
your+名词=yours
- This is your book.
- This book is yours.
七宗罪之灵活的介词
- In my opinion, students can benefit a lot from doing some housework.
- They have also bought for some gardening tools.
- It was a relief and l came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of on the road.
介词错用 / （不及物动词后）漏用 / （及物动词）多用
八宗罪之并列连词
- Suddenly a football fell just in front of me and almost hit me.
- ln order to make sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.
- Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but l have long been out of practice.
送分FANBOYS先搞定：for / and / nor / but / or / yet / so
八宗罪之从属连词
- They also had a small pond where they raised fish.【或者which前加in】
- Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy.
3.l waited patiently until the oil was hot.
优先级：定从、状从、名从
九宗罪之数词基 / 序数
- In the summer holiday following my eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons.
- Then, when l was in the fifth grade, I wanted to be a teacher because l ...
基数词、序数词的转换
最后的救赎之固定搭配
- What's more, doing housework can be a form of mental relaxation from study.
- In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes ...
- To everyone's surprise, the ball went into the net.
- Some of us were confident and eager to take part in the class activity
2️⃣进阶大礼包
秘籍2：逐句突破，考点匹配
实词：名动形副
虚词：冠代介连
3️⃣口诀斩满贯
时代并列和逻辑
明显错误先扫除
动词形，名格数
注意修饰形和副
两类连词常常考
冠词介词勤光顾
代词留心性数格
基序固搭需关注
解题三步走
A：先易后难
- 时态&指代一致性
- 并列结构
- 明显逻辑错误
B：逐句突破
- 名动形副
- 冠代介连
C：查漏补缺
- 考点排查
- 知识点积累
交学费啦
- First l cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside.
- My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by selling the fish.
- Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help.
turn to sb. for help：向某人寻求帮助
