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四六级作文

2023-03-16 20:22 作者:最可爱的Savory_  | 我要投稿

一 第一段各种开图句式

1 名人名言(已讲)——直接抄题干

2 描述图画(已讲)

3 提出问题(已讲)

1)Nowadays , people are faced with / encountered with / confronted with a + adj + problem + of +主题词/ that +主题

举例: Nowadays , college students are faced with an ever - growing problem / issue + of smartphone addiction .

2)Today / Now , the topic of +主题词 constantly captured wide media attention , occupying the newspaper and wreaking horror among people .

主题词:( global warming / smog / the decline of air quality )

        question = issue 

        adj:annoying / disturbing / inventible 

3)the adj problem about +主题词 is increasingly common / prevalent / pervasive / prevailing .

4 新型趋势类开头(科技; e - book ; online class ; robot ; AI ; automation )

1)With the rapid growth brought about____, ____ have/has become increasingly important in our daily life . 

举例: with the rapid growth brought about by science and technology , online class has become increasingly prevent in modern society .

            with the rapid growth brought about by science and technology , the widespread use of e - books has become increasingly important in our daily life .

5 描述图表

1)As the bar chart , the number of____has dramatically increased /decreased during the____years from____to____. 主旨的引出

2)As can be seen in the graphs / bar chart , great changes concerning____took place between____and____. 

6 两面对比(一个东西的优缺点;两个对比的事物)

1)Faced with____, quite a few people hold that____ , but others take different views. From my perspective , I am in favor of the opinion____.

举例: face with a topic that whether we should pursue the furthere studies or seek jobs , quite a few people hold that choosing academic studies is imperative for college students , but others take different views . From my perspective , I am in favor of the opinion of seeking jobs.

2)When it comes to____, some maintain/hold/view____, others argue the opposite is true.

3)Nowadays, 主题词 has become a hot topic among the public. People hold different views about 主题词

4)As regards / when it comes to +主题词

二 主题框架

第一种:正面话题(已讲述)

第二种:负面话题

第二段

第一句:原因的总述

1. Careful deliberation of this problem has given me several ideas as to why this should be so .

2. What factors lead to this phenomenon and what we can do to solve the problem have become a concern to many people . In my opinion the following reasons should be taken into consideration .

3. It is crucial that we analyze the causes of this disturbing issue and explore the effective solutions . From my perspective the causes are multiple .:很长

4. It is not easy to render the reasons for this complicated phenomenon which involves several factors . For my part there are several causes for this problem .

5. In my mind the following factors need to be taken into consideration. 

6. There are several reasons for this phenomenon.

7. The causes may be inner and outer influence .

8. There are a number reasons of this phenomenon .

9. Hence it is imperative (必要) that we pinpoint (精准的指出) the causes of this disturbing phenomenon .

10. People in an increasing number are starting to ponder over what the exact reasons is for the phenomenon shown in the picture .

第二句:原因分述(两个原因)

第一步:第一,第二

1) firstly ; first of all ; to begin with ; in the first place ; on the one hand ; first and foremost ; for one thing 

2) Second , secondly , next , besides , in te second place , for another , furthermore , moreover , in addition , what is more , more importantly 

第二步:原因分述的表达句(引导句)

1 one of the plausible reason is that

2 it largely seems to result from the fact that 

3 主题词+ lies not in a but in b(肯否结构)

4 A survey by China daily found the top reason given by 主体 for 主题词的问题 is____.

第三步:如何写原因

1主体缺乏类(什么样的人缺乏什么样的东西)

●主体

a :大主体

国家 country ; society ; nation ;

政府 the authority ; Administration ; government 

相关结构: relevant / concerning department

媒体: the mass media 

b :小主体

年轻人: teenager , youngsters adolescents ; juvenile 

老年人: the aging population ; the elder 

职业: average citizen ; gradate ; college students ; salespeople ; consumer ; head 

●缺乏(色彩一致的词汇) 

a : lack ( vt )= lack sth

lack of sth (名词短语)

in short of=be in shortage of=be deficient in 

b :忽视

ignore = neglect = overlook / oversight / overpass 

c :未能 fail to have a deep appreciation of(主体未能深刻的认识到)

●客体

正确的教育: correct / proper education 

有力的措施: powerful / feasible / applicable / reasonable / effective measures / steps 

高效的管理: effective management 

有效的交流: workable communication / interaction 

专业的知识: professional knowledge 

充分的准备: adequate / sufficient / considerable preparation 

健全的体制: sound mechanism / system

明确的目标: specific target / aim / goal 

严格的监督: strict / rigorous supervision 正确的态度: correct attitude 

职业道德: professional ethical codes / values 

必要的警惕: necessary vigilance 

第四步:合成

公式1主体+缺乏+客体+ when dealing with + this problem. As a result / consequently , such grave situation is getting urgent and irreversible. 

●处理: tackle ; deal with ; do with ; cope with ; approach ; address ; handle ; solve ; process 

● adi : inevitable ; prevalent ; pervasive ; hazardous ; severe ; obvious 

☑️Firstly , one of the plausible (听上去可信的) reason is that our society lacks sound (健全) employment mechanism when dealing with this problem . As a result , such grave situation is getting urgent and irreversible . ☑️What's more , it largely seems to result from the fact that fresh graduates fail to have a deep appreciation of their advantage and lameness .

公式2:原因句式+庄体+缺乏+客体

公式3:the fundamental / essential / primary / critical factor ( for 主题词) is due to the fact that 主体+ fail to +认识/重视(attach great importance to / place a high value on / put emphasis on)+具体的原因

第三句:问题带来的后果(可写,可不写)

1) such tendency , if left as it is (如果置之不理), could inevitably + 严重后果(消极词汇)

2)累计消极词汇

● pose a threat to 

● do harm to 

● create a heightened concern over sth 

● exert a poisonous / damaging effect on sth

第三段:提建议(第ニ段;第三段)

四级/六级(社会问题和环境问题)

☑️To tackle the problem , it is surely necessary to complete well - enforced laws and regulations and firmly implement them . But rules alone will not be sufficient ,(足够) which must be accompanied by persuasion and education that helps raise public awareness of moral codes lsocial responsibility lenvironmental conservation . All these are beneficial , not detrimental to +主题词.(这些措辞对主题词是百利而无一害)

提出建议的句式结构(自己写的建议句)

1建议的总述句:

● This issue should be well taken into consideration . As to how to address the problem people put forward various suggestions .

● Regarding these reasons I think tere some ways to deal with the problem .

● In order to solve the problem people set forth different solutions and here I would explore only two key ways .

● I strongly suggest that effective steps be taken as s0on as possible to address the problem .

● The following suggestions should be taken into consideration when we are seeking solutions to cope with the problem .

● Considering (鉴于) the severity of this issue we have no choice but to take stringent measures to address this problem .

● It is crucial that we take vigorous measures to tackle these problems .

● Given the severity of this phenomenon we have no alternative / option but to take immediate / prompt steps to address the situation .

● In view of the seriousness of this problem effective measures must be taken before things get worse .

2提建议的固定句式结构(主体应该加强 strengthen /宣传 advocate /提高 enhance )

● it is no exaggeration to say that 毫不夸张的说

● it goes without saying that :毋庸置疑

● keep it in mind that :谨记

● when it comes to :当谈到

● it is imperative / pivotal to do sth / that:有必要 

● should / be supposed to do / tend to 

●动名词结构主语+ be + an effective way ( to +动词+主题词)

举例: choosing the public vehicles and renewable cars tends to be an effective to prevent / hind the air quality from declining .

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