2022上半年四级作文模板课第一讲(模板构成,现象解释)

段落结构划分
第一段:1-2句提出问题(你对这个问题的看法是什么,好还是不好,应不应该做)
第3句过渡
第二段:3个论点+3个论据
第三段:重申观点+提出期望(万能结尾)
现象解释型
eg.The challenges of living in a big city.(why,what)
第一段:
With the rapid development of _economy_(填society,culture,medical service,education,economy), it is of great necessity for_students_(填students,residents,citizens,youngsters)to_study in a big city_.
随着_的快速发展,对于某类人很有必要去(做一件事)。
It is quite natural for us to ponder over the question of_the challenges of living in a big city_.(填主题词)/that+从句
我们很自然地会想到_这一问题---提出问题
第二段:
论点1+论据1First and foremost, there is no doubt that _the house price is high/the price of housing will be huge problem/encountering with the sky high hoysing price, thw pressure of purchasing the real estate will constantly haunt the non locl residents_.
首先,毫无疑问的是,(填最简单的句型)
Based on big date, a majority of successful social elites have admitted that_they have spent 2/3 of their income on housing_.
基于大数据,大部分成功的社会精英承认,他们花了三分之二的时间做某件事。
论点2+论据2Furthermore, it is obvious that _the competition is stronger in big city_.
其次,很明显的是,
Where there _are people_, there is/are _competition_.
有人的地方就有竞争。
论点3+论据3Last but not least, no one can deny that _the traffic condition in big cities is worse than in rural area(郊区)/the traffic condition isn't good in big city_.
Although(Though) _the roads are wider in big cities, there are more vehicle(car)_.
尽管,但是。
第三段:(通用)
In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _the living in big city_. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.
总之,全社会都应该关注()这个问题 只有这样,人们才能有一个光明和有前途的未来。