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就在那一刻 at that very moment

awkward 令人尴尬的; 使人难堪的

指示; 命令; 吩咐 instructing （教的不一样表述!）

every last 全部

Although it's very simple=simple as it was

all the way 一直

1.作者遇到问题——尴尬

2.为什么会出现这种问题

3.遇到问题时作者有什么感受和心理活动

To tell the truth，i made every last bit of effort to catch up with the teacher’s word，but still couldn’t understand what he was instructing at all.Then all the students were required to finish a piece of work on their own.Seeing xxx ，I felt really stressed because i had no idea where to start ，also afraid of others laughing at my weakness.

1.作者的问题解决了 —有人相助

2.怎么解决的 —叫人教你怎么做

3.解决问题后的感受和心理活动—爽

4.文章结尾突出中心 —微笑

1.He seemed to understand my awkward situation，so he turned to me and carefully explained what i should do with fluent English.With his patient guidance，i managed to finish my first Chinese painting！Simple as it was，the teacher praised my work infront of the class.I did my best not to show pleasure，but joy danced all the way to my heart（感受），for（原因） I knew this would be a wonderful beginning of a new school life，just starting with that warm and friendly smile.（扣题）

passage12学写心理活动

文章内容：第一段作者的女儿捡到了一条可爱的小狗

第二段：作者大量的心理活动，不想把狗还回去（我没看出来）

第三段：作者心理活动：内心不安 有人找狗 更加不安

第四段：掩饰 狗和家人关系融洽（反衬）良心煎熬 抉择

写作内容：

接着写心理活动 写自己内心的想法！！！！!打电话时 电话没接通时 接通电话时 挂了电话以后 等那个女人到来的过程中 门铃响了以后 打开门

【学习写法太厉害了】

a girl was sitting under the tree人物状态

she(who) was reading a book 人物动作

①a girl (who) was reading a book,was reading under the tree

②sitting under the tree was a girl (who) was reading a book

描写时间漫长it was only less than 30 minutes before the doorbell rang,but to me it seemed to last a century.