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科技类雅思大作文2篇6.5范文

2020-07-10 13:16 作者:屠雅思带7分  | 我要投稿

根据学生的不同基础,雅思作文有不同的教授方式。

目前这个学生是高一,所以按怎么在考场上写出6分作文的水平来教。

范文是根据我给她的句型,给她做一个示范,同一个科技大类,两种题型的作文怎么用上句型,短时间内捏一篇考场6分作文

题目:

some people think the range of technology available to individuals today increase the gap between the rich and the poor, while others think that it has the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

讨论型作文,4段式

P1

1 People have different views about whether the use of technology increases the gap between the rich and the poor.

2While some people think it dose ,  my opinion is the opposite :NO

P2

1 People in favour of “YES” base their ground on the fact that some technology can only be used by the rich .

2 解释And poor people could not afford it

3 例子 For instance , only those with abundant money could explore the space by taking the advantage of technology ,while people with limited living resources even have to worry about how to feed themselves and their families.

4 递进 Furthermore, rich people have the ability to invest cutting-edge technology to continually accumulate wealth for their empire.

5 总Due to these reasons ,people often claim that technology makes the rich richer whereas the poor poorer.

P3

1 总 However , the truth is that technology plays an essential role in the whole development of human beings including the normal people and the poor.

2 举例For instance , the wide use of internet gains popularity amongst most people on earth , over half percent of whom are ordinary people.

3 That is why many people state that the technology narrows the gap between different social status  for the sake of the information age.

4 Hence , the development of technology has always been the mode of innovation and creation .

P4

1 To conclude, I personally believe that technology is so powerful that the world would consists of middle class as the majority and the extreme rich or poor will be fewer and fewer .


题目

space travel has been possible for some time. Many people think that space tourism should be developed in the future. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

观点型,5段

P1

1 It is argued that space travel should be more and more popular in the future due to the possibility

2However,I disagree with this opinion.

3Instead, I think that the space travel should be limited

P2

1总理由之一 One reason of the oppositions bases the ground on the fact that it is too expensive for ordinary people to afford.

2 解释 (为什么这么说)Thus ,it would turn into the privilege of the rich, which would broaden the gap between the rich and the poor.

3 递进furthermore, the safety of this extreme travel remains a question and it will be a risk for the human being .

4 If anything negative happen in outer space , how can the travellers be rescued?

总 Due to such disadvantages, people often doubt the availability of this travel .

P3

1 总理由之二  Besides , space trip will impose  negative impact on the environment.

2 例子 for instance, the emissions from the aircrafts will definitely pollute the air and result in unknown consequences

3 that is why many people state that we had better not exploit the space too much for the sake of protecting the only universe .

4 hence ,the voice of stopping this kind if trip has always been heard


P4 让步段

It does not mean that we could never ever explore the space ,it just suggests that the trip into the space should not be encouraged .

P5

In conclusion ,only by respecting and protecting the space can we shape a long lasting universe for us and our next generation


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