【一英】读后续写很难?来学点套路与万能句式吧~

环境描写
万能句式:Immediately/Suddenly/,an absolute/a complete + n.+ ruled the +地点n.+and a wave of + 情绪n.+ washed/swept over sb。
突然!一种绝对的…控制了(ruled)…,并且一波 + 情绪+席卷了sb.
Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her.
一阵绝对的黑暗控制了森林,并且一波恐惧(terror)席卷了Jane.
2.动作+心理描写
万能句式:One’s heart pounding fiercely and ones palm sweating,an inner
voice told sb.that...(独立主格)
sb.心脏狂(fiercely)跳,手掌出汗,内心有一个声音告诉自己要......
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
adj.and adj.as sb.was,sb.did sth,doing sth.(非谓语)尽管又…又…,sb.依然做sth.....
Tired and terrified as she was, Jane struggled to her feet,trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.
尽管又累又怕(terrified),她依然挣扎(struggled)站起来,努力不让自己身体(physically)和精神(mentally)都崩溃(have a breakdown)。
3.语言描写
万能句式:Luckily/Fortunately,it didn't take long before sb.did......
幸运的是,sb.不久就做了....
Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave.
幸运的是,她不久就找到了一个山洞(cave)。
万能句式: Sighing with relief,she sensed a glimmer of.......and felt as if sth. had been doing and saying,’......’
如释重负地叹了口气 sb.感觉到了一丝(aglimmer of),感觉好像sth.在对Ta做什么,并且说,’.......’
Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cave had been comforting her and saying,"Come in,you must be exhausted!"
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她感受到了一丝希望,感觉似乎这个山洞在安慰(comfort)她,并对她说,“快进来,你一定很累(exhausted)吧!
丝滑连接二段首
万能句式:With…,sb.did…,+非限制定从
伴随着+一种状态,sb.做了....非限定从
With that she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company.
随着发生的一切,她进入了梦乡,在她的(in whose)的梦里
她丈夫陪伴(keep company)着她。
新的一天来了
万能句式:Judging from the..... , it was evident that sb.was still trapped in_(without any help).sb.was at a loss what to do.
从…判断来看,很显然sb.依旧被困于(be trapped in)…(无助)_sb.不知所措
Judging from the quier surrounding,it was evident that Jane was still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue. Jane was at a loss what to do.
从周围的环境来判断,jane仍然被困于林中,无人救援(come to the resecue)
jane不知道怎么办。
转机出现
万能句式:It suddenly dawned on sb.that sb.should do......
突然灵光一闪,sb.想到了该做.....
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first.她突然灵光一闪,想到了首先该找一片空旷的地方(open area)
万能句式:To ones great.....
令sb.+情绪n./surprise/delight(高兴)....
To her great joy, it didn't take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer.
令她开心的是,她很快就看到了(spot)一片空地,并且听到了震耳欲聋的(deafening)噪声越来越近(coming closer)。
救援来啦!
万能句式: Seeing/ Hearing sth,sb.felt a great sense of +情绪+welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb.
看到/听到sth.,sb.感到一种强烈的(agreat sense of)+情绪,涌上某人心头(welling up in one's heart),并且涌遍(surge through)全身。
● Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.
抬起头并看到了直升机,Jane感觉一股强烈的激动涌上心头,并涌遍全身。
求救
万能句式:情绪+and+情绪,sb.spared no effort to do….so as to...
不遗余力地做某事为了……
Eager and excited,she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention.
迫切(eager)又激动(excited),她挥舞(flagged)着黄衬衫(yellow blouse)
不遗余力地大喊(yell),为了吸引别人的注意力。
欢喜大结局
万能句式: luckily/ Fortunately/ Eventually,....
幸运的是/最终.....
Fortunately,she was noticed and brought into the helicopter.Here, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief.
幸运的是,她被注意到了,并被带上了直升机。在这里,她看到了丈夫,注视着(staring at)自己,满脸安慰(wearing an expression of relief)。
回归主题
万能句式:It was at the moment that sb.did not do......any more but did ……
那一刻,人们才意识到不该做…而是该做…
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. 那一刻,他们才意识到不该再吵架(quarrel),而是该学会妥协(compromise)。
万能句式:What a valuable lesson for sb to learn.
多么宝贵的经验教训啊!
What a valuable lesson For the couple to learn!
对夫妻二人是多么宝贵的(valuable)经验教训啊!
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