【一英】手把手教你写征服李华的英语作文~
七七 | 手把手教你写征服李华的英语作文
1️⃣三步走
三步走：结构、内容、语言
Para 1
- 1-1 寒暄
- 生人
- l'm Li Hua，president of the Student union from...
- 熟人
- I'm so glad to hear from you！
- How nice to hear from you again！
- 1-2 原因
- Hearing that the xx will be held+地点＋时间...
- l am delighted to learn that you are looking for ...
- 1-3 目的
- l'm writing this letter to apply for the position.
Para 2
- 2-1 性格好
- Being an outgoing and sports-loving boy，
- Considered to be an outgoing and xx boy，
- 2-2 语言溜
- l have a good command of English, oral English in particular, which enables me to have no difficulty in communicating with xx...
- command：精通（常接某种语言）
- in particular：尤其是
- 2-3 有经验
- l used to be an editor in …，accumulating relevant experience and knowledge about how to be a qualified xx ...
Para 3
- 3-1 重申
- 3-2 感谢
- l would appreciate it if l could be accepted as a xx...
- 3-3 期盼
- Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
2️⃣衔接句
l'm confident that...
l strongly believe that...
- l'm suitable / qualified for the position.
- l'm a qualified candidate.
- l am an ideal student you are looking for.
- my ability of communication and teamwork spirit
- my experience together with my abilities
- can qualify me for the job.
- perfectly meet your requirements of the position.
3️⃣衔接词
- First of all，/ To begin with，/ Above all，
- Besides，/ What's more，/ Meanwhile，
- Last but not least，/ ln addition，/ More importantly，
假如你是红星中学学生李华，你从中央新闻网获悉"2022年北京冬奥和冬残奥会赛会志愿者全球招募”活动，你对此志愿者很感兴趣，请你用英语给奥委会负责此项工作的Steven Smith，写一封申请信.
内容要点：
- 说明写信意图；
- 陈述自己的优势；
- 表示你希望被录用.
参考词汇：
- 冬残奥会the Beijing 2022 Paralympics;
- 中央新闻the China Central News Service 【CCNs】 website
Dear Mr. steven,
I'm Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Hongxing Middle school in China. Learning from the CCNS website that the olympic committee is looking for volunteers for theWinter Olympics and the Paralympic Games，which will be held in Beijing，China in 2022，I'mquite interested in it. I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer.
To begin with，l believe l am a qualified candidate. Being an outgoing boy, l'm easy toget along with and always ready to help others. Meanwhile，I have a good command ofEnglish, especially spoken English, which ensures that l can communicate with the foreignathletes effectively. Additionally，l used to be a volunteer in our school, accumulating abundant experience and knowledge about how to be a qualified volunteer. l am pretty sure that my ability together with my working experience can perfectly meet yourrequirements of the job.
l would be very grateful if you could give me the opportunity. Looking forward to your early reply.
