欢迎光临散文网 会员登陆 & 注册

雅思口语par2——描述一个环保的人,完整逻辑

2020-08-11 14:12 作者:屠雅思带7分  | 我要投稿

Describe a person who helps to protect the environment

一个人+做了什么事


我一般会有一个引言/导入,来引入到这个演讲话题,不超过20秒

第一层次 -导入 ,我是怎么知道这个人和事的

Not until the late 20th did the human beings start to realize theimportance of environmental protection.

Though as normal people , we could makeour efforts on this topic ,the person who I think has great influence would beBill Gates

By referring to him , most people wouldremind his huge success in business ,however ,since heretired from MS, he has devoted himself into the non-profit world ,among whichbeing a environmentalist has always been his top priority.


第二层次,这个人做了啥,讲细节

I got to know his stories through adocumentary named “What is in Bill Gate’s head”, whichis a truly incredible deep dive into him andwhat he has been up to as life mission.

In short ,he mainly deals with the global bigissue ,such as climate change, energy shortage ,sanitation and so on.

讲细节的时候每个层次之间有衔接词

In the film, He first tried to buildtoilets in Africa in an attempt to attack the sanitation and river pollutionproblems .

Also, he invested in the vaccine with the hope to keep local people inwest Africa away from infectious diseases .

Besides ,he endeavored to work with China to construct nuclear plant,unfortunately ,ending in the disagreementfrom his local government.


第三层次,我对这个人做的事怎么想,评价

To be honest , the projects did not goswimmingly as his team expected since it calls for not only numerous financialinvestment ,but also the support from local governments.

Furthermore , without consensus on an internationalbasis ,no one will abide by the agreement


第四层次,我对这个人的感受

Compared to his position in the business ,the final results of his fighting are not that brilliant .

However ,his spirit stillshines as what we call Buddha or Buddhism in our eastern culture, symbolizing someonewho sacrifices his own benefit for the sake of the rest of all the human kinds.






雅思口语par2——描述一个环保的人,完整逻辑的评论 (共 条)

分享到微博请遵守国家法律