写作-框架

Part three——Outline

一呈现形式

1图表／图画作文 

2名人名言引出

3开放式写作

4提纲式写作

二 topic （主题——主题词——多变）——句句要点题，点题不重复

1大学生息息相关

1) 缺德，缺心眼（自传）

●传统美德：友善；勤俭节约；诚信，孝敬

●大学生的素质机能：身心健康，乐观，自信，合作，创新，自律，责任心，突破逆境，读书，勤奋，坚持

2) 二代教育

●大学教育 

●亲子关系

2和人类息息相关

1) 社会问题

●人口问题

●食品安全问题 

●社会热点问题

2) 环境问题

●雾霾

●全球变暖

3两面问题（开放式写作）

●二选一

●二合一

4科技发展

●自动化

●手机 or 电脑

●云课堂 

●电子书籍

三 outline （框架结构）

1正面话题

第一段：描述图片／图表／名人名言引出／直接引出．主旨的引出

第二段：我的观点＋主题词带来的具体的好处＋举例＋总结

第三段：概括总结＋呼吁／提建议／名人名言

2负面话题（提出问题＋分析原因＋解决问题）

第一段：描述图片／图表／名人名言引出／直接引出．提出问题（色彩词）

第二段：原因的总述＋原因1＋原因2+带来的危害

第三段：建议总＋建议1＋建议2

3两面话题

四正面话题

1写标题一题干一居中

2第一段

第一种图片描述

1⃣what an adj ( encouraging / positivel moving / touching / familiar / discouraging / annoying / irritating ) scene is the cartoonist showing us! Presented in the picture + be ＋人＋ who + is doing sth . 2⃣It aims to instruct us that ＋主题词的重要，性／主题词 is an extraordinarily valuable contributor ( element ) necessary for us to succeed in intelectual pursuit , career prospect and life journey .

举例： what an encouraging scene is the cartoonist showing us ! Presented in the picture is a teacher who is telling her student that reading is of great significance in our routine life / it is the reading that install the new software into our brains. *️⃣It aims to instruct us that keeping good habit of reading / book learning is an extraordinarily valuable contributor ( element ) necessary for us to succeed in intellectual pursuit , career prospect and life journey./ It aims to instruct us that booking learning is key to acquiring abundant knowledge.

第二种：名人名言

As old saying goes :" " It aims to instruct us that 主题词 is an extraordinarily valuable contributor ( element ) necessary for us to succeed in intellectual pursuit , career prospect and life journey.（写小，写

切题）

举例： As old saying goes :" no opportunity for the lazy but diligence can make the most common variable opportunity . It aims to instruct us that the high quality of is an extraordinarily valuable contributor ( element ) necessary for us to succeed in intellectual pursuit , career prospect and life journey. （写小，写切题）

3第二段

第一句：我的观点

from my point of view / from my perspective / for my part / what I hold is that +好处1（序数词）具体的好处／对比／五大弘扬句式；moreover, 好处2；＋总结；

第二句 举例

（第三句：反面论证）

4第三段：

第一句：逻辑词：总结＋主题词好处／名人名言

第二句：呼吁（呼吁正能量）

1逻辑词

1）in summary ; based on the above analysis , we may draw a conclusion that ; to sum up ; in a conclusion ; in short

2）recognizing the fact that ＋主题词的重要性 will lead us to conclude that from what has been discussed above , we may reasonably / finally draw a conclusion that 

2in short, 主题词＋ lays a solid foundation for us to set ( specific / ambitious ) goals / targets , overcome ( formidable / various ) adversity and achieve ultimate success .

  From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably / finally draw a conclusion that 主题词 really counts （重要） in this ( quick - paced ; ever - growing ) society .

3呼吁

people , especially the young , should 重视( highlight ; underscore ; place a high value on ; focus more on A rather thanB ; pay more attention to A rather than B )/ cultivate / foster ＋高贵的品质

举例

☑️From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably draw a conclusion that the traditional value of thrift really counts （重要） in modern society full of wasting . People , especialy the young , should cultivate the green lifestyle .

☑️From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably draw a conclusion that the such high quality realy counts （重要） in modern society . People , especially the young , should cultivate the mindset of perseverance.